The Mysterious key
Once there was a key that was rusty and frozen on the cold grass. There was a boy that walked slowly and saw a key. He had a power to melt it. When he melted it he picked it up it was glistening. Then he walked slowly to the jewels shop. Hi said the boy can you help me find how dropped this key said the boy. Ok said the man give it to the girl on the other side of the street said the man ok said the boy. Then the key went in a big shiny glow oh no said the boy he went on a big adventure. They where a girl standing in the shop. It was a glistening shiny shop it was very posh. Hi said the girl hi said the boy can you help me find how dropped this key the boy. It looks like a monster said the girl oh said the boy.
I like the cold grass in your story Leah. The with the hi bit you will need a capital H and you spall dropped. MA I have now sorted it.