Burravoe Primary School

Mia’s 100 Word Challenge

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All is quiet in Monstervale, a little too quiet. Do you ever feel like you’re being watched by someone? You don’t well I have the feeling. It is really creepy. I feel like it is by a humungas weird eyed creature. I can’t see it though. It is a strange feeling. I have to say it is super strange, wait I already said that I should tell you my name. My name is…… ARRRRRGGGGGGGG. What was that? My name  is J…. ARRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGG. JANE my name is Jane. I can see the humungas monster its right there. I feel really sick.


2 Comments

  1. I really liked it. It was really funny when the monster roared when the girl was trying to say her name.

  2. Dear Mia,

    You have used lots of great techniques to build up tension, what a great 100 word challenge. I really enjoyed reading this.’

    Mr Foster – Shrewsbury International School Bangkok

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