A man called Jamie, a hunter came home and put 2 pheasants and a duck on the table.
He thought about his son and 2 daughters remembering their requests for presents.
he walked to the kitchen after his long day of hunting, told his soft chocolate cocker spaniel to lie down.
On his table he placed a rifle, A knife, and dog treats his wife said ,’that stinks’
He thought it was heart breaking he spent all day hunting and his wife put him down.
By Roland
very good poem Roland, I like the way you talk about hunters.
I like your poem this is my favourite On his table he placed a rifle, A knife, and dog treats his wife said that stinks.