I want to be a shark,
not a human walking on the land.
I want to be a shark swimming freely through the sea,
not trapped in school,
not unable to explore.
I want to be a shark,
who can be the boss and not get annoyed,
who can tell unwanted visitors to go away,
I want to be a shark,
unaware of rules,
without a worry in the world,
I do not want to be a shark though if I’m going to be captured,
and put in a tank.
I want to be a shark so I can be free.
Good job Ellie I was very surprised you chose a shark but you made it sound really good your last lines were the best.
this is soo good ellie
wow Ellie! I didn’t know you loved sharks! I love this poem! Its very descriptive!
Ellie this is a really good poem I liked the line where you said you wanted to be a shark, unaware of the rules.