Up-levelling a simple sentence

Today we practised up-levelling sentences in our BIG writing lesson. ‘Up-levelling’ means making writing a higher level, by adding interesting and ambitious VCOP – Vocabulary, Connectives, Openers and Punctuation.

This was the one of the sentences we up-levelled:

‘The dog ran after the ball.’

Here are our up-levelled texts…

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