perswasive letter

Dear Mrs hagertys

I’m writing to persuade you to buy more playground equipment for the puples in St Patrick’s primary school .Others will agree that the seniors yard does not have any equtment such as benches , football nets ,monkydars,and lots of other equipments.Every other yard has at least something in it but our’s doesn’t have anything.

In my personal opinon ,I think we should get the exacte same amount of equtment as they have.So I think we should get an assultcourse or something like that keep us fit and healthy .

School Equipment

Dear Mrs Hagerty

It goes without saying that pupils outside in the playground are moaning about why there is no playground equipment.My personal opinion is the same because most of the boys are playing football and the other half are just standing around thinking what could they do to keep themselves occupied. But its not just the boys that are dissapointed about the lack of equipment.Some of the girls are moaning aswell.

I believe that some of the equipment we could have are some of the basics like , a beam, football goals,basketball hoops and basketballs.The equipment could also help our social skills and to keep healthy.

Please can you take my letter into contemplation. I hope you take this in urgently.

Yours sincerely Sean Allan.

playground equipment

Dear Mrs Hagert y I am writing to you at about playground equipment because there is no games to play in our yard pupils are bored and then they will get into trouble.

I have thought of some playground equipment swings, climbing frame , football goals I know you will have to wait there turn on some of these equipment but then they will develop there spcial skills.

I hope you take these iades for the fauter

Playground Equipment

Dear Mrs Hagerty i am writing to you about the playground equipment as i think we should certainly have more as there is not enough for every one to play and when people are bored fights start and arguments.

There are many good ideas that I have came up with so here are some of them monkey bars,climbing frame,basket ball hoops and basket balls and this is just some of the ideas that the children would welcome.This would be great entertainment for children of all ages.

A good reason for some of the equipment is that if they are set up and built right then they are safe to play on and wont snap,brake or hurt any one.I hope you have liked my ideas and consider using them in the near future

Yours sincerely

Aiden McShane

playground equipment

Dear Mrs Hagerty

Iwould like to notify you that my class mates and I would like some playground equipment . I agree with this idea because of the benefits it will have on us . This playground equipment will keep children occupied there for there will be less fights in the playground that spills into class time. As you know we desperately need to work on our social skills and this could help develop them. This would also make interval more interesting for the pupils of the school. Surely an intelligent person like yourself knows how important physical and mental fitness is to young children.

This playground equipment would also benefit future generations of ST Patrick’s primary.The senior pupils yard is dull and boring for there is nothing to occupy us.To raise money we could do some fund rasing like bingo nights or sponsored walks.

I hope you will take my letter into perspective.

yours sincerly Beth Crawley

Persuasive Letter- Playground Equipment

Dear Mrs Hagerty, HT ,

I am writing to ask you to take urgent action to install playground equipment in the senior yard and take it into serious consideration. I am aware and appreciate that you all ready have many great plans in place for our school, but I ask you to make this one of your top priorities.

I am conscious of the fact that children are suffering from boredom whilst out in the yard due to a lack of playground activities. As you have acknowledged in the past , this leads to pupils finding alternative games, one such ‘game’ as fighting.

I believe that you and our classroom assistants will have no doubt discussed the problem that football dominates the majority of the yard , often causing injuries, due to the lack of space where other pupils have to socialise. As well as injuries , arguments take place on the pitch that spill over onto valuable class time , as teachers spend lots of time getting to the bottom of the incident.

Furthermore, surely you will agree that we need to participate in outdoor activities that are fun , give us energy and encourage us to challenge ourselves? We spend many hours couped  up inside, therefore we should be encouraged to take advantage of the good, fresh , Scottish air and prepare us for the afternoon ahead .

Mrs Hagerty, I’m sure that you will agree that it’s now time for the senior pupils to benefit from some outdoor fun. It goes without saying that an adventure track would be suitable for both boys and girls to play in harmony.

Yours Sincerely, L.C

Tesco Bags of Help Award!

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Tesco has teamed up with greenspace scotland to launch its Bags of Help initiative across Scotland. The scheme will see three community groups and projects awarded grants of £12,000, £10,000 and £8,000 – all raised from the 5p bag charge.

St Patrick’s Primary School has been selected to receive a reward and it’s now up to the shoppers at Tesco to vote for the winners! We would like to improve our playground by adding play equipment for our children. Please vote for us to get the £12,000 grant!

Bags of Help offers community groups and projects in each of Tesco’s regions across the UK a share of revenue generated from the five pence charge levied on single-use carrier bags.

The public will now vote in store from 27 February until 6 March on who should receive the £12,000, £10,000 and £8,000 awards.

www.tesco.com/bagsofhelp

 

 

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