Once when Willy wonka was busy working…Then there was a huge SMASH! Willy wonka ran to where it was .All the sweets and chocolate were all over the place. “Who did this?” said Willy wonka “The pipe was just away to burst,boss”said one of the loompa oompa . We ll need to fix it then. All the loompa oompas got to work then it was all fix in 1 day. We ll all eat the sweets said willy wonka YEAH shouted all the loompa oompas . we all got eating, even Charlie Bucket was there too. this is yummy said Charlie Bucket.
byJake Paul
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