(Part 2) Millie said for every one to calm down but every one cept shouting and screeming. Suddnely it went very very dark hey could here the floor braking the lights went on. There was giant holes witch look like feat. Millie was very frightend that it went very dark! She had to do something about, it so Millie had o call the police. “hello police some one has killed the staff at the sparkle hotel,” Millie said
“Ok miss we will come in 2 minuts.” the police man said.
“Good.” Millie said. Millie put the phone down. TO BE CONTINUED
i liked how you said that someone was killed at the hotel,and the part when you said that Millie was trying to keep everybody calm.I think you could use less talking at the end.
from Kendall