One lovely day i was playing baseball with my friends called Piper,Donald duck and Aids.But duck through the ball to me i hammered it in the bush so Aids had to go and get it and in my home run ,he through a bucket at me then through the ball so i was out.I looked in the bucket there was treasure in it and also two little men so i went home with my friends came back with my mum the bucket it was gone … i think an alien stole it but he had died…
the end by Jim Bob
i like the start but i am not so keen on the end