Monthly Archives: September 2017

Willy Wonka s Factory

100WC

Once when Willy wonka was busy working…Then there was a huge SMASH! Willy wonka ran to where it was .All the sweets and chocolate were all over the place. “Who did this?” said Willy wonka “The pipe was just away to burst,boss”said one of the loompa oompa . We ll need to fix it then. All the loompa oompas got to work then it was all fix in 1 day. We ll all eat the sweets said willy wonka YEAH shouted all the loompa oompas . we all got eating, even Charlie Bucket was there too. this is yummy said Charlie Bucket.

byJake Paul

THE BUCKET

100WC, Jim Bob

One lovely day i was playing baseball with my friends called Piper,Donald duck and Aids.But duck through the ball to me i hammered  it in the bush so Aids  had to go and get it and in my home run ,he through a bucket at me then through the ball so i was out.I looked in the bucket there was treasure in it and also two little men so i went home with my friends  came back with my mum the bucket it was gone … i think an alien stole it but he had died…

the end by Jim Bob

 

THE STORM

100WC, Tobi

My friend was over for a sleep over but while he was there,there was a storm.The storm was big.While we where having dinner water was coming in are house!It kept going in.Eventually we called the police.The police took about 45 minutes.We had to swim by the time they got there.They came in a boat and we had to hop in the boat to be safe.We had to go to the police station to explain what happened.We said we where having dinner.Then suddenly it went dark.We where all scared until we realized that it was a power cut.We went home again.

the space travellers

Blog, Fries

one day I was playing with my friend Jammie Dodgers but then we heard a rumble then a crash… It was coming from outside.So I went outside with Jammie Dodgers and found green slimy ALIENS luckily me and Jammie Dodgers made a small rocketship out of cardboard so me and Jammie Dodgers got in the small rocketship flown away!But what would we tell our parents?We flew to mars and found fuel but it was getting a bit late but luckily we were planned we brought a tent and sleeping bags. So we slept there for the night when we woke up we got in our rocket and flew to the moon when we landed there was a big crash then me and Jammie Dodgers jumped out of the rocketship so we looked around and it smelled like smelly socks!But luckily we had gas masks so we put them on.We heard noises going like blobby blobby boo! now we were really scared Jammie Dodgers tried to run back to the ship but I stopped him before he got too far.We went to see where the noise was coming from so when we walked further and further we eventually found where the noise was coming from It was a big MONSTER so we ran back to the ship and flew away.

the time machine

Blog, Fries

once I was tidying my room and my mum shouted “once you are done tidying your room you can have some cookies” So once i finished tidying i went downstairs to have some cookies. So when got to the kitchen mum said you just eat the cookies!                           Then I found cookie crumbs…                                                       I followed them and found a TIME MACHINE!!!!                  Then I found me from the future! So we played a game and I won so he went back to the future and I got the cookies and I was happy :] But before he went away I asked him are there hoverboards in the future.

 

 

 

The hockey game!

Blog, Jammie Dodgers

Every Thursday night me and my Dad go to a game of hockey we have lots of fun.My Dad plays for Granite City Wanderers ,and so do I.Me and my Dad play at the rubislaw playing fields. My coach is called Stacy she is teaching us how to play hockey. I’ve learned how to do a hit,push,sweep,reverse sweep,flick the ball in the air,spin,jab tackle and block tackle. The person who organised the hockey I go to is 1 of my Dad’s friend called Sandy. My coach said that i would be a good defender. I have to wear long socks,shingaurds and mouthgaurd.

Don t kill Rats in Paris

Big Write, Jake Paul

I think rats should not  to be killed in Paris because…  There re harmless. If I lived in Paris I would leave them to live. I would call the police if I saw anybody murdering the rats. But there has been several parks shut  down I would be very sad if I could,nt  play at the park. I would kill half  of them then leave the rest. I would never ever kill baby rats [naughty people].People are  trying to stop the murder of killing the rats. Who would kill RATS!? I would,nt  because they live in the sewers that s where there trying to go to the drains. Why  do people kill them why. Don t kill the rats!

 

The Giant foot

100WC, Neil

At 11 o’clock last night te party was unleashed     DON DON DON . The party rockers  where dancing non stop and party anthems rule the world now.                                                                        They will rule the world with music. but one thing can stop them from it the mighty                earmuff is shooting through the sky throwing the ante venom every where curing people      but he ran out of them so he went to plan tow earmuffs and throw them all  until they ran   out of them so he asked his fends they made a super earmuff and saved the world and the   but the party will ries agen

the mysterious footprint

100WC, Jim

hie my name is Jim.Today me and my Friends are playing the xbox one I was playing with tic tac Steve and Tim Bob me an tic tac were playing in a team.Then we went to play in the nearby Forrest where bears live.when we got there we built a HUGE den then we played tag.then we went back home we played rocket league and halo 4 me and tim bob won most of the time.Then I said ”why don t we just go back”.When we got there we saw HUGE foot print when we got to the den we saw more.

…then suddnely it went very very dark… (part 2)

100WC, Tiffany

(Part 2) Millie said for every one to calm down but every one cept shouting and screeming. Suddnely it went very very dark hey could here the floor braking the lights went on.  There was giant holes witch look like feat. Millie was very frightend that it went very dark! She had to do something about, it so Millie had o call the police. “hello police some one has killed the staff at the sparkle hotel,” Millie said

“Ok miss we will come in 2 minuts.” the police man said.

“Good.” Millie said. Millie put the phone down. TO BE CONTINUED