One day Emily came round to my house and she slept over. We were watching TV when the TV went off. All I could see was two red eyes. Me and Emily screamed and my dad came rushing down. What is the matter? We saw two red eyes! Out of the shadows there was a vampire. Help, we said, there is a vampire in my room. When the vampire came out we saw it was Ryan dressed up. Booo! Ryan said. You scared me, Emily said. Then there was a noise. I bet that is a real vampire, I said to Emily. Shwoop…… what was that? Just the wind. I think…….
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Great 100WC Erin! I love the ending to your story. Just remember to add speech marks where needed in text. Keep up the great writing!
HI,my name is Jett. I have written a few scary stories. I like the way you finished the end of the scentence! I wonder why your (little brother) would do that?