I didn’t remember putting it on, everybody was laughing at me because I had a ballerina costume. I ran out of the club forgetting that it was it was lunch, as I slammed the door shut and got more unwanted attention than I needed then everybody took out there phones and started taking photos, then I said how can my day get any worse and my answer came right after after I said that my phone blipped about 1 million times, that was when I new it was Instagram. Now I wanted to die you know that can’t happen but it was like I wanted to be invisible. I am just going to go home lets go.
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December 2, 2020 | 1 Comment
December 12, 2020 at 4:25 am
Hi, Victor. I do wonder how one managed to wear a ballerina costume without noticing it, as those tend to be rather difficult to put on! You’ve described the people in the club as being quite cruel, laughing at the main character like that, which makes for a very tense and conflict-ridden story. Though I might have liked more punctuation in the text to make it easier to read, I thought the emotions came through quite clearly. Keep it up!