I didn’t remember putting the engine on. I was on a hill and my car started rolling down and it hit the old lady. I called 911 and a police man came with a ambulance and the lady died I went to prison for 5 years. So my friend bailed out .THE END
100 w/c AJAY
December 2, 2020 | 1 Comment
December 6, 2020 at 11:51 am
Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Ajay. I can see you have interesting ideas to write. It is easy to concentrate on getting ideas written down, and forget to punctuate. A good strategy is to read your text aloud so you can hear where punctuation marks should go. (Or you can ask a friend to help you edit.) 😀