One day a cute, cheeky monkey was swinging from the trees. All of a sudden the fluffy monkey falls!The monkey went ooh ooh ah ah. The monkey bumped her head and she thought the tree was water. She licked the tree and she got a nasty sharp splinter.
by Tyrese, Alicia, Andrew, James, Amy and James.
To Tyrese, Alicia, Andrew, James, Amy and James
I feel sorry for the monkey because it bonked her head.
Is there anything funny the monkey did.
From Toby
Room7
NZ
To Tyrese, Alicia, Andrew, James and Amy
How did the monkey fall?
Did the monkey ever get the massive splinter out?
Your monkey post was cool because when I read it I was amazed how much you wrote.
from Ashton (room7 nz)
To P4
Your story about the cheeky monkey is cool. I like the part when the
cheeky monkey was swinging on the trees. How did the cheeky monkey
swing on the trees and fall off ?
from Debbie
room7
nz.
To P4
Your story was cool. I liked the part when the cheeky monkey
was swinging on the trees. How did the cheekey monkey swing
on the trees and how did the cheeky monkey fall off ?
From Debbie
room7
nz.
To p4
I like your story because it sounds interesting.
Why did the monkey think the tree was water.
From Christian
room7
nz
To class P4
I feel sorry for that monkey beacause it got a sharp splinter.
Did the cheeky monkey do anything silly again?
I liked how you described the fluffy monkey.
From Fin room 7
nz
Awwwwwwwww! Poor monkey! You don’t know this but I have an obsession for monkeys. Everyone in my class knows. When I saw the word monkey, I knew I HAD to comment on this.
Leora from Texas
You are all very good at writing story’s and I love it.
Awwwwwww. I feel so bad for the monkey. I bet she was sooooo cute! I think that it was interesting that she thought the tree was water. Also, I liked how you described what happened to the monkey.
Katie from the Kinkaid Lower School in Texas
I love monkeys! It’s sad that monkey got hurt. I think that money was really cute! If you ever see that monkey, again tell him that I feel sorry for him falling down.
Lexy from Texas
Lovely story. Some of my friends and me read the story all together and we had a laugh at the end.
Funny story and fun!
Staugustines junior school
Funny story!
That’s a really good and funny monkey story. I liked the bit when you sad that the monkey bumped her head and thought the tree was water and had a sharp taste, that was funny!!
Wow!!! That story was so cool!!! My favorite part was when the monkey bumped it’s head and thought a tree was water!!! It was really funny!!!!
Good job!!!!!!!!
Virginia from Texas
weldone poor monky it looks like you had fun writeing the story