Primary 6 have written more great poems on the rainforest. This times we wrote acrostic poems spelling out ‘The Rainforest’.
T- There was a spiky flower that stung my leg as I walked along the forest flower, it stunk. I read in a book that it’s called a rafflesia.
H- Horrid nettles stung my arms and with fear I looked up above my head and I could hear a beautiful macaw soaring through the sky.
E- East, South, North and West my compass said. I looked around with fear when suddenly something bit my ear. It was a horrid spider, I shook with fear.
R- ‘Roar’ said the lion as it flew past me. I shouted with glee it’s orange fur was as bright as the golden sun, it was very fun.
A- As I walk through the rainforest I saw a beautiful butterfly flutter past me. It was orange, green and red it landed on my head.
I- In a corner I saw a snake it was yellow and red hanging above my head.
N- Now it was silent but not for long as a very loud gorilla ran along.
F- Further away I saw an enormous elephant walk through the jungle, it was a lovely sight.
O- On a leaf I saw a little lady bug, it was bright red and I think it was dead.
R- Rattle snakes slither past me as I sang with glee I suddenly stopped to let it pass me.
E- East I was walking and then I saw another marvellous macaw fly past me.
S- Suddenly a large lake splashed me and I was as wet as a fish in the sea.
T- Then I stopped, it was the end of my marvellous trip I shouted with glee it was finally me!
BY ABBY KNOTT
TIGER
T- Trudging through the rainforest were four big paws. Each armed with sharp and spiky claws.
H- Humidity was reaching twice the normal and fear was burning all the nearby life.
E- Elephants run into hiding spots. Trees shake as the monkeys swing away.
R- Red hot eyes like burning cities and pumas as black as mist.
A- An ocelote facing the other way stands watching the waterfall suddenly flashing white fangs tear into it’s neck.
I- In the upper layers the birds stop singing. The leaves crinkle back in horror.
N- Nostrils flaring like jet engines. Ears twiching like flapping bird wings.
F- Fog changes direction when it’s gaping jaws open.
O- Orange fur blazes in the sun and the black stripes streak across the body of the walking bullet.
R- Rouge tailed, it races through the trees stopping by the rocks of a cliff. Brazing it’s paws and tilting it’s head.
E- Echoing it’s roar across the forest ripping through the trees.
S- So now everyone knows it’s the king of the jungle as it stands on the top of the cliff.
T- The tiger is here and he’s hunting for blood.
BY CONNOR MARSHALL
great great great great great great there all great
VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY GOOD [:
There were all Fantastic
fantastic work p6!!!!!!
good work abby and connor
by stacey sinnet
GRAET WORK
great stuff
I LOVE IT MY SISTER IS IN P5 I REALY LIKED YOUR OPEN AFTERNOON
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these are fantastic well done Abby and Conner
I have read them over and over again