Burravoe Primary School

September 22, 2015
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100 word challenge

This is my 100 word challenge I hope you enjoy it.

I travelled to Paris yesterday. I was told about a legend, the legend of the leg haired flowerpot which came from the land of pots. But it didn’t always have leg hair. It travels late at night in search for legs, brilliant legs. Legs from manikins of course, store owners are worried. Can he get through locked doors? My Dad just opened a clothes store filled with manikins. I am worried. That night I stayed at the store cleaning. Then it came! I heard a thump, thump, thump. I saw it at the locked door. OH NO I screamed! Suddenly………

September 22, 2015
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100 Word Challenge – Dad’s Big Plans

This week we did the 100 word challenge again. This was my second entry.

Dad’s Big Plans

Erin’s dad had BIG plans. He wanted to build a shed in Erin’s part of the garden but Erin had a very special talent, talking to animals. Her best friend was a bunny called Holly who lived in Erin’s part of the garden.

The day came for Erin’s dad to build the shed, Erin really did not want him to build the shed. She knew he would flatten Holly. The tractors had started and then suddenly Erin shouted “but under the earth is where my best friend Holly the bunny lives”! “Dad you can’t build your shed….

September 22, 2015
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Flower pot Story

In paris thier was a flower pot with legs with blue and red stripes. The story was Once upon a time thir was a flower pot made in paris and their was legs stiking out of the flower pot. They were having a fundraser. The ot looked very angry. The flower pot went to in a shop. They were knocking down water bottles and spilling on thr floor. The pot was Trying to get out the door  they Were

September 22, 2015
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Emer’s 100 Word Challenge: The Planet Bang! Bang! Bang!

From the planet BANG!!!BANG!!!BANG!!! The story begins he was brushing his teeth with his legs that looks like tooth paste he nearly banged open it was so minty he couldn’t bare it that he fainted in anoidniss. He couldn’t have a drink of water because he couldn’t walk. So he NEVER used it again so he NEVER brushed his teeth again witch he was anoid that he want to do it NOW so he fainted again and again and again. Then he was anoid for now on I mean for EVER!!! and EVER. The legs were real or were they?

September 22, 2015
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Dilivering Milk

There is five ducks going to the river. The man is delivering milk to the cake shop. a lady is walking the dog and another lady is taking a little girl for a walk. the car is blue. the boy is feeding the ducks.

September 22, 2015
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My 100 Word Challenge

The Evil Flower Pots

A number of years ago there was a young girl, called Honor. She was playing with her friend, Olivia and they were playing at the local play park. They were playing tag, when KABOOM! Honor knocked her head on a flower pot! Honor didn’t notice that her head was bleeding until she got in her car and her Mum drove past her house and to the ferry! When Honor was at the hospital the doctor said she needed her head glued. From that terrible day on all of the flower pots started eating people for revenge.

September 22, 2015
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My Hundred Word Challenge

The Slimy Shoe Monster

One Day Lindsey, a little girl went to the shoe shop with her ANNOYING!!! Mum. Lindsey was so bossy and nobody liked her. Her mum showed her a pair of shoes and whispered “these shoes look nice” but then Lindsey shouted”NO I WANT THESE!!!”. “Okay but under the earth the Slimy Shoe Monster will get you”explained her mum. “NO HE WON’T” Screamed Lindsey. Then when Lindsey got home she wanted to walk around in the garden to get used to her new shoes but then the Slimy Shoe Monster appeared and ruined her shoes. Haha LOL!!!.

 

 

 

September 22, 2015
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The Angry Flower Pot

There was a flower pot with……… legs in it, I know that is a bit weird but just go with it. One day the flower pot was walking around in the street. He saw seven ladies all with one leg each. It was a fundraiser for people that has one leg (except from themselves) .They didn’t have much money, flower pot tried to walk away from them really fast into a shop. He bought loads of clothes like a hat then the ladies knew it was him. He was angry! That is how the seven ladies are in that pot.

 

September 22, 2015
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My 100 Word Challenge Piece

Last week we did the 100 word. The 100 word challenge is when you write a story but it had to be 100 words. Enjoy my story!

The Amazing Evil Kitchen pot

Mum was cooking tea in the kitchen, Emily was in the sitting room playing with her dolls. Suddenly Emily heard a scream it was coming from the kitchen. She ran through and saw a walking, talking FLOWER POT eating her mother!

She Shouted STOP but it was too late it had eaten her all up. Emily pushed the pot out side as it grew. It started to grow legs at the top of its head! Emily screamed HELP! Her father came home. He was a wizard. He zapped the pot and the pot stopped moving…

September 22, 2015
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100 word challange

Evil Cup

One time in the Wild West over 500 years ago, there was a cup with a face and it had 7 legs. It turned upside down, ran around the towns of the west, and stole food, gold and money from the cowboys and others that lived there. But the Evil Cup was scared of loud noise. One day a crazy old man came he was holding a fire work. So one cowboy got 2 sticks and that night the Evil Cup came they lighted the fire work with the sticks and then the Evil Cup never came again.

September 21, 2015
by Emer
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The Five Sentence Challenge

There is an old fashioned truck it is delivering milk.There are ducks that are about to swim in the lake.One of the ducks is eating bread because the little girl is been feeding the ducks.There is roses growing on the house they are red.There is a lady walking a dog.

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September 21, 2015
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The Creepy Flower Pot (100 word challenge)

Long long ago there was a creepy flower pot who came from South  America and it even spoke American. The story of it no one  knew but I think I could tell you. Once upon a time there was a creepy flower pot sculpture it scared everyone away. He scared everyone away with his legs growing out his head but they were only fake. But still it was creepy. That is the story of the creepy flower pot head sculpture but remember it is not exactly true so never believe it too much.

September 7, 2015
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My Hilights From The Yell Show

On Saturday it was the Yell Show and I enjoyed it allot. I was really happy because I got a first prize for my Hamma Beads. I went in the ball pool with hard balls but it did not hurt. Me,Emer and Abby all jumped in at the same time it was really fun and some times you sink and that is funny and it is so hard to get out Abby and Emer had to pull me out. Me, Emer and Abby went on the bouncy castle and there was a window and there was a slide out of it and me and Abby went down side ways and it was really fun. Me and Abby went to play on the tombola and we went twice and the first time we both did not win any thing and the second time won some bubbles and Abby did not win any thing. Me and Emer got balloons and Emer’s balloon floated away but I gave Emer my one instead.

Rosie hamma beads

September 7, 2015
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Yell Show

At the Yell show enterde. My picture in and I enterde some cakes thy were owl cakes thy were cool I got 2nd prize and for the my pictures I got a well done and it was fun.

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