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KHS World Book Day 2016

Kelso High School’s  celebration of 2016 World Book Day happened a day early here at KHS on Wednesday 2nd March as Reading was celebrated all across the school.  Colourful posters adorned classroom doors highlighting each teacher’s favourite childhood series of books, the Grand Final took place of the Interhouse World Book Day Quiz with worthy winners Teviot snatching victory in a closely fought contest from Kale and Bowmont and the Grand Final of the S1 World Book Day Quiz saw Alice Rea and Suzanna Robson crowned 2016 Champions.

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Many thanks to all who helped make the day so memorable, especially S6 who really entered into the spirit of WBD by coming to school dressed as characters from a varied selection of books.  The winners of the S6 Fancy Dress competition were as follows:

 

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Individuals:

1st: The Watchman – Gavin Wilson-Green

 

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2nd: The Hunt for Red October – Zak Leifer

3rd: The 100-Year-Old-Man Who Climbed  Out the Window and Disappeared

– Andrew Martin

 

Groups:

1st: The Mister Men – Dan Cormack, Robbie McKinley, Callum Norris, Ewan Paul

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2nd: Adam & Eve – Katie Millar & Sophie Aitchison

 

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3rd: Gandalf and Frodo – Angus Johnstone & Cameron Mowat

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Our celebration of WBD 2016 came to an end with S6 pupils visiting classrooms, reading an extract from their chosen book and distributing WBD Book Tokens.    If your child did not receive a WBD token and would like one, they are available from Mrs Guthrie in the School Library or Mrs Changleng in the English Department.

 

Plans are already underway for next year’s KHS World Book Day celebrations – watch this space!

Portfolio: Persuasive Writing

Persuasive writing is a form of writing in which the writer uses words to convince the reader that the writer’s opinion is correct in regards to an issue.

Persuasive writing encourages careful word choice, the development of logical arguments, use of carefully constructed rhetoric and a cohesive summary.

Here are some of the techniques we have discussed.  Remember to include these  in your persuasive writing:

Engaging opening
Lists
Rule of 3
Addressing specific concerns of the audience
Rhetorical question(s)
Emotive language – think about connotation
Second guessing
Exclamation
Inclusive and Exclusive Language – Personal pronouns: I, my, you and your. Use of them / their
Repetition of key phrases / anaphora
Formal language
Antithesis / opposing ideas
Facts and figures
Similes and metaphors
Catchy words and phrases
Anecdotes – little stories to illustrate a point
Naming someone famous / an authority / an expert
Quoting from someone famous/ an authority / an expert
Quoting from a poem, a bit of Shakespeare/ a religious text
Naming a moment in history, or a classical reference
Ellipsis at the end of a paragraph…
Short sentences for effect
Long sentences, punctuated by semi-colons, and commas
Signal or Signpost Words
Linking Sentences
Forceful phrases
Humour / irony
Imperative verbs
Alliteration for effect
Engaging ending

THE EXAMINER’S VIEW ​ ​ ​

The best candidates: ​ ​

Write in a way which shows ​clarity​ of thought and persuades in a ​convincing / compelling ​way​
Engage the reader with ​detailed​, succinct argument, a ​range​ and ​variety​ of persuasive ideas, abstract concepts, vivid detail, e.g. makes a moral appeal, invokes finer feelings ​
​Makes and sustains the purpose​, intention and objective of writing, e.g. by specifying outcomes, considering implications ​
​ Write a ​formal ​article, the tone of which is ​appropriately serious but also manipulative ​and subtle, employs e.g. assertion, reason, sophistication​ ​
Use ​linguistic devices ​such as the rhetorical question, hyperbole, irony, satire in an ​effective​ and ​appropriate​ way
Show control ​of ​extensive​ but ​appropriate​ discursive marking e.g. ‘ Surely it is reasonable to expect….’, ‘One ​alternative position might be..’ etc.​
Now look at what you have written and check whether you have used some of these techniques.

With the Prelim fast approaching – just to remind you…

Are you clear on exactly what is in the written exam? Do you know how much time you have for each element? Have you studied and prepared for these elements before the prelim?

Paper 1: Reading for Understanding, Analysis and Evaluation

Higher  90 mins / 30 marks
Two  passages

All questions apart from  the final question will be on Passage One.

Final question – will ask you to identify and discuss either similarities  or differences between  the two passages.  Remember to follow the  formula for answering this question.

Paper 2: Critical Reading – two sections 1hour and 30 minutes

Section 1: Set Text on the poetry of Norman MacCaig

45 mins / 20 marks
3 or 4 questions on the given extract and an 10 mark final question – revise your formula for answering this final question.

Section 2: Critical Essay – on ‘The Great Gatsby”

45 mins / 20 marks

Remember to build both planning and proofreading/editing time into your time management.

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With the Prelim fast approaching – just to remind you…

Are you clear on exactly what is in the written exam? Do you know how much time you have for each element? Have you studied and prepared for these elements before the prelim?

Paper 1:  Reading for Understanding, Analysis and Evaluation

National  5           60 mins / 30 marks
One passage

Paper 2:  Critical Reading – two sections 1hour and 30 minutes

Section 1:      Set Text on the poetry of Norman MacCaig

45 mins / 20 marks
3 or 4 questions on the given extract and an 8 mark final question  – revise your formula for answering this final question.

Section 2:  Critical Essay  – on ‘To Kill a Mockingbird”

45 mins / 20 marks

Remember to build both planning and proofreading/editing time into your time management.

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