My Favourite Dog (Mack)

I talk to my favourite dog

I told him I’m running

I told him he’s a good dog

I told him he was my favourite

My heart was dark like space

My life is a black hole slowly chipping away at my heart after he left

I wish I could see him again

By Fraser Robertson

4 Replies to “My Favourite Dog (Mack)”

Alexander Robert Carr says:

14/03/2022 at 13:44

great poem Fraser that final line was great and them words i wish i could see him again so sad

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Finlay says:

14/03/2022 at 13:46

nice poem I like the way you use short sentences-

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Gojus says:

14/03/2022 at 13:54

I really like the last bit in the poem

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Fraser says:

14/03/2022 at 14:58

nice poem Fraser R i like the black hole sentence

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