Tag Archives: Above and Beyond

What do you want to be?

Do you sometimes want to disappear, go unnoticed, have no attention drawn to you? Maybe you would like to go in disguise somewhere so no one would recognise you.
The reverse might be true, you want to stand out, have people look up to you and admire you. Laugh at your jokes. Whatever you want to be or however you want others to see you this is a great poem to express just that!

Primary 7 have written poems after listening to Selima Hill’s Cow poem and another from our own S6 pupil, Emma. 

P7 worked with S6 earlier in the year and really enjoyed hearing their voices and getting some feedback on their own creative work. A big thank you to Emma for giving us her poem as part of our lesson. P7 thought her poem was very moving and talked at length about the different parts. 

Read Emma’s poem here.

Read the P7 poems here.

 

Above and Beyond

One of our P7 poets has been reading and researching poetry in her own time. We’ve been using metaphors and similes in our poems this week and she brought in this poem to show me this morning. This is a wonderful piece and I am impressed that Evie has taken time to find a poem that fits so perfectly with our current focus.

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My Heart

Now I can run on the wind

My skin like a velvet shiver on the breeze

My hooves passing over the grass

In leaps too great to be measured

My mane trembling like the boiling clouds

You will feel my breath

In the sounds of the sky

Now I can run

In these great wild rolling hills of time

I am free

I am really free

Hear in

The

Spaces of

Your heart

Edited and typed by Evie