P4/5 have been working this morning on creating personifications to make their writing better.

A personification is when you bring an object to life. Here are some examples:

Maryam, Fatimah, Hikmah and Aliyan: The warm, soft sofa is calling my name to come and sleep on her.

Safa, Eshal and Fraser: The cup screamed when the girl went to take a sip.

Ahmed and Fahad: The car galloped across the city.

Hassan, Jalal and Danial: The swing danced along with he music.

Umarah, Navleen, Idris and Yusuf: The table struggled to hold the King and Queen’s banquet.

Sadeem, Azaan and Hussain: Th bin was hungry for rubbish.

 

Some of the Full stops were doing similes:

Sadeem, Azaan and Hussain: The pencil is as sharp as a thorn.

Antony and Bashayer: The car was as fast as a lion.