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Kalina’s 100 word challenge
Looking behind me, I saw a hazy figure and the dungeon started to go eerily quiet. I turned back round then I felt a heavy cold breeze shiver up my spine. A voice, no… more of a whisper, was like a breath in my ear. It was almost like a skeleton and I was sooo scared. It was old, ragged, bony with long brown toenails. It was disgusting… I could not stand it any longer. It was shocking to see a gangster skeleton…. I could not believe my eyes!
Ben’s 100 word challenge
Looking behind me I saw a large run down castle. I started to walk very quietly, saying anyone home? No-one answered. I headed towards the big door. I reached out with my shivering hand. I tried to stop my hand from knocking on the door. The knock sent a long echo through the corridors. The door started to slowly but creakily open. I ran to the first set of rocky stairs and went to the top of the highest tower. As I looked down I saw skeletons walking slowly.
George’s 100 word challenge
One day I went to the big, dark woods and I was going to sleep there. So I started putting up the tent but the tent had fallen out of my bag. I started to look for it but it was getting dark and I was getting tired. A shape came from the distance. I walked on but I was still scared. I stopped and looking behind me I saw a big, scary, hairy werewolf. I ran for my life. The werewolf took a big leap in front of me and I killed it. I found my tent in the bushes.
Erin G’s 100 word challenge
Looking behind me I saw a zombie. I tried to get out but there were zombies left and right and in front of me. What could I do? I said to my self. AAA!!! With my phone I called my dad and Duncan but the zombies took it and broke it. I started to scream. Help help I shouted. After 2 hours I touched one of the zombies- it felt weird. I saw somebody looking like my dad. I pulled the zombies hair and it was a mask! My dad and Duncan were being zombies. After that we went for supper at pizza hut.
Grace’s 100 word challenge
One scary night I went to a dark forest. It was very quiet and there was a really huge tree. Then I heard clip-clops. I was shivering.Suddenly I saw big glow behind me. It became very spooky and something made the bushes shake. I turn round and nothing was there. Then I felt a shiver up my spine but it was feathery. It was weird. Then the trees rustled. The weather was rainy. I saw shelter and I ran to it and looking behind me I saw a beautiful unicorn with wonderful wings. She gave me a lift home but I couldn’t sleep.
Jack’s 100 word challenge
Looking behind me I saw a ghost in shiny armour with an axe chasing me. I hid in a bedroom and the ghost switched off the light and let scorpions out of their cage. The scorpion’s tail was golden. I wanted it so bad. Then a door creaked open and two red eyes peered round the door. Then I scented food. I went down the stairs and saw a vicious dog guarding the food fit for a king. There was a roast dinner waiting for king Author that died 1,000 years ago.
Quadblogging in P5/19
We are taking part in Quadblogging again this year. On the right is a list of our partner schools. Click on a link to visit their blog and make a comment. Please make sure that you have read the tips for making quality comments, found on the rules page. I will let you know each week which school we are focusing on. Happy blogging!
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