Looking behind me, I saw a hazy figure and the dungeon started to go eerily quiet. I turned back round then I felt a heavy cold breeze shiver up my spine. A voice, no… more of a whisper, was like a breath in my ear. It was almost like a skeleton and I was sooo scared. It was old, ragged, bony with long brown toenails. It was disgusting… I could not stand it any longer. It was shocking to see a gangster skeleton…. I could not believe my eyes!
Hi Kalina
I think your story is really imaginative. It is cool as you.
You are good writer.
From Tylah-Dawnn
Kalina, what a brilliant entry for the 100WC! I loved your description as it completely set the creepy scene for me. I wonder what a gangster skeleton does? Keep up the great work 🙂
Hello Kalina, we liked your writing because it made us shiver. It made a great picture in our minds. How long did it take you to write 89 words?
That was some fantastic work!
Hi Kalina. your description in your story is great.
I loved this piece of writing. Do you think your teacher would mind if the P6s stole this idea and used it in our class too?
I liked your story it was and awesome.