Target – to create a report with correct headings and lots of descriptive language.
Introduction
Where is P5/20land?
Landmark 1
1.What is it?
2. What happens there?
3. What does it look like?
4. Who uses it?
5. How long has it been there?
6. Where is it on P5/20land map?
Landmark 2,
Landmark 3,
Landmark 4,
Landmark 5.
P5/20land best area.
Describe and explain.
P5/20land worst area.
Describe and explain.
Conclusion.
What is your opinion of P5/20land.
Example
P5/20land.
Introduction.
P5/20land is a beautiful island that is situated just off Markethillland in the tropical waters of the northern pacific. It has a small but friendly population. It has recently become devolved from Markethillland and now is in charge of its own care homes, police force, armed services, education and transport. P5/20land has many important landmarks that makes it stand out from all the surrounding islands.
The School.
The School in P5/20land is one of a kind it has some of the finest architecture in the whole of the pacific. The school has a role of 97 with five fantastic teachers, 3 fabulous PSA, a helpful janitor, lovely cleaning staff and a canteen the would rival a michelin star restaurant. The education that children receive in the primary school is second to none and they constantly have parents from other countries trying to get their children in the school. It is a beautiful building that has many interesting features, the stone work is medieval and the roof is thatched which is very rare. It has been in the north east spur of P5/20land for 300 years and was the first ever purpose built school on the island.
P5/20 Land
Introduction
P5/20 Land is a fabulous Island in the middle of the gigantic cooling waters of the Atlantic Ocean. Next to P5/20 Land there is A different land, It is also amazing but just not as great as P5/20 Land. This one is called Markethill Land. Not that long ago, P5/20 Land decided they would be a devolved From Markethill Land. P5/20 land now takes care of the armed forces, Education, Transport systems, Fire services and care homes, They are the best you can find anywhere!. The lands population is Small but Happy and Most people come on Holiday to P5/20 Land because it is warm,sunny and Inviting! The shape of the land is also very rare as it is in the shape of a P and a 5! It is definitely a great place to live or to visit and anyone that has been there will give it a Fantastic rating.
Vets
The vet is a fantastic hospital for animals, they give every single animal the best care and make sure they recover every time! They care for any pet and can also help wild animals!! The vets have never let any owner down and the pets leave beaming,happy and healthy. If you send your pet there they will be treated carefully and will stay over night if they need to. There are 6 surgens and 4 people who do check ups and care for new borns. Anyone who has a poorly pet comes to the P5 Vet. It is a Building that was built after the old one shut, it has a tiled roof and is painted white all over. It will be 5 years old on June the 4th 2013 and to celebrate its hard working 5 years they are giving free care for anyone for a week. The vet is at the bottom of the 5 in P5/20 land next to the gaming store and close to the sea where the Titanic 2 sits.
AirPort
The Air port is A huge Place where People Leave P5/20 Land on planes to go on Holiday, or for people coming to P5/20 Land. There is 10 pilots and 20 Flight attendents to make sure your flight is comfortable and happy. The ratings are fabulous and mostly 5 star. The fights are smooth and no turbulance! The air port is majestic and Massive Its been there for 10 years. It has a glass roof and brick walls. Inside the airport there are shops, Bagging areas and Comfy seats where you can watch planes take of and land, and keep an eye out for your flight. It is on the top right hand corner of the P.
School
The School is the best school around and it educates every child, disabled or not. Hen your child starts P5/20 Land they go to the school for 6 hours, with a 20 minute break and an hour lunch included. There are 12 teachers, 6 PSA’s 2 janitors and 3 cleaning Ladies. Everyone wants to use it and people from all around the world are trying to send there child to this school because it is the finest school ever teaching, history, science, english, Drama, Art, Language and Math. It was grey but the parliament had a debate and most people voted to repaint it a different colour. It is now green with a glass roof and stone walls. The grounds are huge with fountains and bushes and flowers all around. It has been standing for 100 years even though it has been refurneshed and had a lot of work done. The school is on the east spur of the 5.
Out door pool
The out door pool is a great place for anyone to learn to swim, or just go swimming with friends. There are fun and floats setions or privet setions for Adults. You can also book parties there where you get giant inflatables out! Anyone can use it as there are ramps for wheel Chairs to get up and it is been made accsesible for disabled people. Adluts and children can use it as it is fun for everyone! It is a brick building that is brown with a slated tiled roof. It has been there for ages! About 500 years! It is in the middle of the P next to the airport and above the railway station.
Zoo
The Zoo is the worlds most Amazing Zoo! There are animals of every Kind! It also has a petting Zoo for small children. You can go for a walk round all the different cages, or take a drive through the open fields of animals! After you can go into the indoor petting zoo and play with Kittens rabbits, Puppies and Guiene pigs and hamsters plus lots more! The outdoor petting zoo has Ponies, sheep, goats, Pigs Cows and a lot more! It is Massive and outdoor with cages and open fields all around! It has been there for 6 years now! It is on the edge of the bottom of the 5 next to the beach.
Best part of P5/20 land
The best Part is The Zoo because it has loads of animals and is a fun day out for all of the family! I would recommend it to everyone and Loads of people from all around the world fly to P5/20 land just to see the animals!
Worst part of P5/20 land
The worst part of the land Is KFC! No doubt about it! It will be knocked down in 6 months because people keep Complaining about the food and service! They Have also go bank rupt and all the workers have quit!
Conclusion
Over all P5/20 land is an amazing land that everyone loves. It has 5 star ratings all round and has some of the most amazing things from all around the world! You would not want to live anywhere else.
P5/20 land
introduction
p5 land is a devolved because do not parliament. It has many landmarks including the church, KFC,McDonald’s, magic shop and hotel including many more it a good place. we also have a queen miss B. It is a massive P5.
The church
The is there so people can worship to god. They read bibles and pray about a lot of things. Christians go to pray about god. it is a huge building with stane glass windows I t has been there for 2000 yaers and one day. It is beside houses and shops.
Magic shop
In the the magic shop is full of magic and cool tricks! Magicians use it and trainee magicians use it too. The magic shop looks bright and colourful with magic tricks for sale in the window. It has been there for two years and is located beside KFC in the north of the island.
Hotel.
The hotel is somewhere that tourists stay for a couple of nights at a time. Tourists and anybody having a holiday on P5./20land use it as it’s the best hotel. It has a lot of windows and stoney bits. It has been there for 5000 years and was one of the first buildings on P5/20 land. It is located beside the airport.
KFC
It is a fast food restraint. People go there to eat and drink.anysbody that wants to go can.It looks coulerful and tasty!it has been there for two years.
It is beside the magic shop.
P5/20 Land report
Introduction
P5/20 Land is on the planet Jupiter, it is next to Markethill land, P5/20 land is a devolved parliament and it is in the shape of a P and a 5 the population is 2389 apart from Markethill the population is 9999 but P5/20 land is the best place ever plus the Queen is Queen Miss B of P5/20 Land.
Landmark no.1 Gaming centre
It is a Gaming centre of p5/20 land. Heaps of people buy video games there so they can play them in their homes. Everyone uses the Gaming centre because they like the games consoles that they sell. It looks like Aberdeen, union square, it is huge. It has been there for 20 years. It is beside the vets.
Landmark no.2 Church
It is an old Church were kids play there with secret bases. Kids use it for there bases. It looks like an old abandoned Church witch has been there for 2000 years. It is behind McDonald’s.
Landmark no.3 Railway
It is a Railway station witch is an old train museum that everyone uses, It looks like a railway station that has been there for 200 years and it is everywhere in the P.
Landmark no.4 candy shop
It is a candy shop that people buy candy there and everyone uses it, it is bright coloured
and it’s been there for 7 years now. It is in front of K.F.C.
Landmark no.5 Titanic 2
It is Titanic 2 people go on cruses on it and Everyone uses it. It’s a gigantic boat and has been there for 11 years, it’s in the water.
P5/20 Land’s best area
The Gaming centre is the most popular and best place because everyone loves a good video game here and there.
P5/20 Land’s worst area
K.F.C because we already have a fast food shop.
Conclusion
I think P5/20 land is an amazing place and tourists will love P5/20 land. David I
Descriptive Report About
P5/20 Land
Introduction
P5/20 land is a amazingly, beautiful island that is in the middle of the wonderful waters in the pacific ocean. You can hear lots of squawking birds flying around the glorious island and you can see fluffy clouds floating in the sky. P5/20 land is a really, really bright and fun place to live in or visit on a holiday. It has become devolved from Markethill land and it is now in charge of Armed Forces, Education, Transport Systems, Fire Services and they’re own Care Homes. P5/20 land now has a queen named Queen Miss Bulloch. The queen has to sign the laws that she agrees with.
Supermarket
The Supermarket is a wonderful building where people go shopping and sales are held. The Supermarket is very popular because everyone uses it like the employees who work there and the customers. The Supermarket is really busy because everybody needs food, clothes and drinks. It has been there for only 3 years so it is quite new. The Supermarket is close to housing, McDonald’s and roads.
Dairy Farm
The dairy farm is a wooden red barn which is used to keep the cows and they’re calves in. In the dairy farm the cows get milked which is cleaned out through a factory and bottled up to get put to the Supermarket.
The Dairy Farm has been there for about 10 years now. The Dairy Farm has been built beside the hills and quite close to the Harbour.
The School
The School is a place where children get education and the teachers support them. There are 102 spectacular children, 10 fabulous teachers, 7 lovely canteen ladies, 2 helpful janitors and 5 terrific cleaning ladies that all go to this School to learn or to work. The School has been in P5/20 land for 9 years now, which is a very long time. It is near the bridge and Scottish Waters.
P5/20land
Introduction.
P5/20land was discovered 200 years ago. 97% of the people who goes there thinks it is a great Island with a great queen, her name is Miss B. It is in the pasific ocean next to Markethill land . 2 years ago we diceded to have a devolved Parliament we are encharged of armed Forces, education,Transport system,fire service and Care homes.
Swimming pool
The swimming pool is in the South North of the land it is exactly in the middle of the p. There are 3 lifeguards per day. Mums,Dads and children go there to learn how to swim and just to have some family time. There is a jicoosy next to the changing rooms in has a wave pool ever 5 minuts. The out door swimming pool has flumes in the north corner of the pool the out door swimming pool has been there 40 years tomorrow and the inside swimming pool has been there 41years.
Big Ben
P5/20 land
Introduction
P5/20 land is a spectacular place in the middle of the red sea it is next to Markethill land it has a devolved parliament it has responsibility’s they have armed forces , care home , fire services police. We made laws and got them sight by are queen her name is Miss B.
KFC
KFC is a place where you get lodes of food its next to Scottish water and the school lodes of people work there people of p5/20 land go there to get food it locks like it is red and there is a picture
of man face .
Airport
The airport is an amazing place where every one uses it it is next to the hotel and the airport is absolutely huge it looks like a white building and a black cover there is loeads of plans red ones blue yellow and black .
Old railway station
Introduction
P5/20land is a beautiful place and the land is shaped as a P and a 5 that is why it is called P5/20land and it is next to Markethill land and it has a Devolved Parliament and they are responsble for Arm forces, Education,Transport skistim, the Queen of P5/20land is Queen Miss B and she is very lovely and pretty.
Old railway station
The old railway station is a place on P5/20land and people go to see it but not go on it because it does not move it is a statue but you can go in it and have a look and it is old and rusty but very beautiful and fantastic, the old railway station has been there for 4000 years and it is under the swimming pool and beside the hotel.
Outdoor swimming pool
The outdoor swimming pool is a very awesome pool and lessens are taken place there and all sorts of people can go there.
Descriptive report about
P5/20 Land.
Introduction
P5/20 land is a gorgeous, little island in the south pacific ocean shaped like P5 that has bean there for almost 2000 years, next to P5/20 land is a island called Markethill land but recently P5/20 land has become devolved from Markethill land and is now in charge of Armed forces, Education, Transport, there own Fire service and a care home. P5/20 land has a small but friendly population, but every year there is about 14 families that come for a vacation and
have loved every day being there. There are lots of fun activities for disabled people, children and adults.
The outdoor swimming pool
The outdoor swimming pool is brilliant, there are flooms, a wave ma sheen, lots of floats and a huge diving board. Swimming lessons take place every morning for kids and there’s even a swimming lesson for adults every 2nd day! The swimming pool is bright and colourful its a great place for just chilling out and there are bathing chairs if parents/garde ins don’t want to go in there are 3 lifegards there because its a big swimming pool and for other safety reasons . The out door swimming pool has been there for about 1 year now. It is in the middle of the P.
The hotel
The hotel is a family hotel and all you have to do is pay then you get breakfast, lunch, and supper free. The hotel has been working for 2 years and was built in 2011, it was meant to be ready in 2012 but they couldn’t because there was a big rain storm. The hotel is very posh and the building is bash stone and it is next to the Air port.
Vets
The vets is brown with a glass roof and is at the bottom of the 5 in P5/20 land. The travellers are allowed to take there pet on holiday with them so if the animal is sick or hurt it will go to one of the most famous vets on the island and if the animal is very sick or badly injured the owner is allowed to stay over night with it. It has been there for 20 years.
Introduction
P5/20 land is the most beautiful land that has ever lived but it is a bit small but never mined and it is also next to Markethill land it is near the tropical ocean it has a magic store and a gaming store a vet and an airport it is so sunny it could be the land of your dreams you can hang out the magic shop has loads of tricks to learn and cards to do and the gaming store now the vets the queen is called queen miss b.
Magicshop
The magic shop has been going on for a 100 years now and it is still open most of the kids these days go over there to learn hot to do magic tricks so when they are older the can be real magictions some times kids have partys there are some times people even get chosing to come up and be an asistant and inprove there magic skills. It is very colourful with playing cards and magic hats to .It has been there for 100 years .It is beside KFC.
Gaming store
The gaming store has been going on for 2 years and the kids keeps on going to it there upsest with it so they decided to start making consols like xbox360 wii ds ps3 psp.kids get to go spend there money sometimes but most of the times they get to have a look . The kids use
P5/20Land
Introduction
P5/20land is a magnificent eye catching land located in the Atlantic Ocean. When you look off the peer you can see lots of dolphins. P5/20land is next to Markethill land it has a devolved parliament and is in charge of its armed forces, education, fire service, care homes and transport systems.
The Church
The Church is a church of P5/20land where people go everyday Sunday to listen to Mr Gruer. Anyone can go to the church if they want to and lots of people do go every Sunday. It is tall beautiful building that is magnificent to visit. It has been in P5/20land for 300 years. The church is located in the middle of the island next to the helicopter pad.
The Magic shop
The magic shop is an awesome shop where lots of people go to get lots of magic equipment. It is a little shop that is beside KFC in the north of the island. It has been there for 10 years and is very successful.
The out dores swimming pool
The out dores swimming pool is an amazing place to go and it
introduction
In p5/20 land there is a wind farm a gaming store a school an outdoor swimming pool a macdonalds a kfc and lots more. We are in charge of the armed forces the police and the fire services. P5/20 land is in the shape of a p and a 5 it is on the north coast of Atlantis and the queen is called queen miss b.
school
the school has the finest structure in the whole of the pacific. The school as a role of 97 with five fantastic teachers 3 fabulous psa’s a helpful janitor lovely cleaners and lots of canteen ladies. The school is made of medieval bricks and the roof Is thatched. The school has been around for 10000 years.
Hotel
the hotel is on the north west of p5/20 land it is a 5 star luxury hotel with a plasma 3d tv in every room. There is 100 floors and over 5000 rooms. Each room is £2000
Descriptive report on p5/20 land
Introduction
P5/20 land is in a wonderful place in the hot Indian ocean.
P5/20 land is next to the peaceful land of Markethill land, p5/20 land has a devolved parliament so we can make are own laws and we have a queen to make them proper laws, the queen is Miss B, she is a very good queen. P5/20 land is shaped in the shape of a P and a S.
Church
The church is a very old church it is 156 years old, it has crumbly old walls but despite it rotting away there is always lots of visitors and tourists going to look at the old fading pictures on the rotting walls. The minister also goes there sometimes to pray with the people from the island.
It is also in the middle of the island beside McDonald’s and the helicopter pod.
Lighthouse
The lighthouse was built 20 years ago it is not a normal lighthouse it is black and white, others are normally red and white. The lighthouse is in the North West of p5/20 lands sea. It is also good for tourist attractions and holidays. It helps tell the boats how close they are to the shore.
School
The school is a very old school it is 89 years old but is still there and it has been decorated a lot to make it look nicer than it would have been. The school has pretty medieval stone walls and a old church bell hanging in a little slot on top of the roof. It is meant to be one of the best schools in the whole world! It has great educations for the children and has good jobs for the adults.
Descriptive report on p5/20 land
INTRODUCTION
P5/20 land is on a beautiful part of south west of Scotland in a small warm corner near the coast. It is next to Markethill land. It has a devolved parliament and in charge of the arm forces, education, care homes and police force. It has a population of around 3000.
The school
The p5/20 land school is very friendly and situated near the coast beside the scotish water that is fresh. The school has lots of trips in the fine days and people come to visit and give interesting talks on the area. All ages of children attend the school and there is a nursery for the smaller children. The school has 350 children.
VETETINARY
The p5/20 land has a magnificent veterinary. The vets are vere good because they hellep all animols, pets and birds by the sea. There are 3 very good vets that are on 24 hour call and they are very busy. Its at the botom of the five next to the games store.
SWIMMING POOL
The p5/20 land has a large indoor Swimming pool where all the people can go to different seshens. There is a little pool for the childen with fun seshens. There
are lessons for people who want to lern to swim with very good instuctors. Theres a big dithing board with a little slide and a midel slide and a big slide. It is in the midel of the p.
SWEETIE SHOP
The p5/20 land has a small sweetie shop were people go to get sweetes.The sweete shop has lots of lole pops. It is bad for your teeth.Not a lot of people go to the sweete shop
P5/20 land
introducion
the extrordenery p5/20 land is in the pacific ocean next to Madagasca and very close to it is amazing markethill land , it in control of the armed forces ,education ,transport systems ,fire serves and care homes the population is small
but the people are very kind and welcoming it would be very cool to come here because there is lots of different things you could p5/20land has a devolved parliament because we want to be incharge of our things.
Fishshop
1 the fish shop is a really cool shop that sells scrummy fish sometimes the people of p5/20land go there just to there to chat because the people that work there are really kind and chat to every one. At the fish shop people come to get fresh fish wich they take home to cook and eat but the can also get a take away if they are tierd it wont cost you much money and the people and the tourests love it because it is just a realy cool place . The fish shop looks old fashion as it was made in 1878 it has different coloured bricks and a boring tiles on the roof but thats what makes it special it also smells of fish and it is right next to the blue tropical waters of the pacific and the sheep farm.
Introduction.
P5/20land is an island that is shaped like P5 so that is why it is called P5/20land. P5/20land is next to Markethillland. It has a devolved parliament that has responsibilities for their armed forces, education, transport, fire service and their own care homes. P5/20land is a fabulous place because of all it’s lovely places.
The outdoor swimming pool.
The outdoor swimming pool is a fabulous swimming pool. There are swimming lessons held at the swimming pool. Swimming instructors, children, disabled people and all other adults use the swimming pool. It has lots of water slides, a really high diving board and blue cold water. The swimming pool has only been there for a year it was built because there was nowhere to swim before. The swimming pool is in the middle of the P part of the island, next to the helicopter pad and above the railway station.
The Church.
At the church people pray and go to the church and sing song,s and there is play,s and craft,s that kid,s can play with and when you come to the church every sunday you will see a tub that people put money in the tub the people at the church make,s the church better like making it bigger and more room,s and there is a shop that you can have tea or coffee
the game store.
At the game store is people selling xbox,s and wii game,s and ps3 game,s there is alsow cool because it is cind of a swettie shop and there is a toy shop [people go there every day to play game,s and stuff and people usally hang a round the vet,s all the time and there is house,s next to the vet,s.
Kfc
at the cfc there is people that have there dinner breakfast and there supper the cfc has a advert on the tv people love the kfc and some people hate the kfc when people come back from a long jorney they somtime,s go to th4 kfc for dinner and when they go to aberdeen for shopping they go to the kfc for supper.
Vet,s
the vet,s help animals like cat,s and dogs and horeses if they are in dander and if they are stuck in a tree or something.like that or when a cat is stuck in a house the vet,s will bee there to help the animal and there is dog,s for sale and cat,s oand hamster,s or something like that
p5/20 land,s best area
the best area is the swimming pool because it is fun and it has water slidesand it has a divving board
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