I can use clever ways of getting description into my story.
I can create an exciting adventure story.

Assessment criteria
The story has lots of clever description that adds meaning to the story.
The story is exciting.
The story has capital letters and full stops in the correct places.
The story has paragraphs which help make the story make sense.
The story makes sense all the way through.

I can create an interesting story with excellent description of settings and characters.

Self assessment on the piece
1. Is the story interesting?
2. Have you used up levelled wow words?
3. Have described the characters?
4. Have you described the setting?
5. Does the story make sense all the way through?

1. Write down your favourite animal sound and why?
2. How would you make the sound of the beluga whale, dolphins and leopard?
3. Which animal do you think would be the easiest to communicate with and why?

http://www.seaworld.org/animal-info/sound-library/

We have PE on Mondays, so bring in your kit and tell the rest of the class if you can. Hope you’ve all had a great Christmas see you Monday.

Miss Philp Smith