Well P5/20 I am just waiting for the fish to acclimatise to the water temperature then they will be completely in the tank. I think you are going to be very excited when you see them tomorrow, I went a bit fish crazy.

Today we are looking at writing an exciting adventure story on how the fish ended up in P5/20. The most exciting, imaginative and clever story will win the chance to name the fish. As always half the class will be typing them up and the other half will be doing it in their jotter.

Here are the success criteria for today’s story. . . . .
1. A beginning that stimulates the reader to read more.
2. Good, clever, description of characters, setting and the exciting events.
3. Using capital letters, full stops and paragraphs where needed.
4. An exciting event in the middle of the story, which stands out as the main point of the story.
5. An ending which brings the events to a conclusion and leaves the fish in the tank in P5/20.