Well P5/20 I am just waiting for the fish to acclimatise to the water temperature then they will be completely in the tank. I think you are going to be very excited when you see them tomorrow, I went a bit fish crazy.

Today we are looking at writing an exciting adventure story on how the fish ended up in P5/20. The most exciting, imaginative and clever story will win the chance to name the fish. As always half the class will be typing them up and the other half will be doing it in their jotter.

Here are the success criteria for today’s story. . . . .
1. A beginning that stimulates the reader to read more.
2. Good, clever, description of characters, setting and the exciting events.
3. Using capital letters, full stops and paragraphs where needed.
4. An exciting event in the middle of the story, which stands out as the main point of the story.
5. An ending which brings the events to a conclusion and leaves the fish in the tank in P5/20.

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Thank you
Miss Philp Smith

Add your edited stories in the comments.

I hope you are all keeping warm and are enjoying the snow.

Challenge for today
Can you write a sentence, that makes sense, full of ‘ie’ sound words.
Build a snowman and take or draw a picture of it, you can email it to me or bring it in when we are back.

Most importantly stay safe and have fun.

Hi Miss P.S how are you? Today I made cupcakes, went sledging and swimming

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Hello P5/20

I hope you are staying safe and enjoying your day. Tasks, if you would like to, for the snow day are . . . .
1. Write an exciting snowy adventure.
2. Can you create a matching game for 3D and 2D shapes, ie the match would be a description of the shape and a picture of the shape.
3. Play the games on the links section of this blog.
4. Read your ‘horrible’ book.
5. Have fun, tell me what you’ve been up to in a comment!