18 thoughts on “Reading task 50 word summary”

1. Long ago, pirates travelled the world looking for treasure. They only wanted to find gold and diamonds. The pirate captain shared out the treasure. The cabin boy got half a share, the sailor got one share, the quartermaster got one and a quarter shares, the surgeon got one and a quarter shares and the captain got two and a half shares.

2. Jackie was always forever finding things in a yellow rusty old skip. The rusty old skip was at the corner nearby the estate by the phone box. She always liked to have a good mooch around whenever she was wanting have some peace and quiet. Also she wants a horse!!!!!!!

3. Spud is a very naughty, disobedient dog but the reason why I like him is because he is very funny.
   The book is a very funny and exiting book which has got a lot of thought in it. So far Spud has been hilarious but now it is getting sadder and sadder.

4. My book is called Spud. Spud is a dog and he lives with his owner Mrs Piffey. Mrs Piffey works at a salon that she owns. The book is really funny. Spud is a terribly behaved. Spud can get muddled up with himself and can be a handful at times!

5. So far in this great book it has been exiting! So far there is a girl called Jackie Dawson and next to her flat there is a yellow skip were she get most of her belongings. Her wish is to be a really good horse rider like the Crazy Cossacks.

6. Spud is a book about a dog who think his owner Piffey is going for a turkey dinner but she is actually going to the country Turkey spud is sad, lonely, board, worried and scared because he is left with a woman called Elsie.
   Elsie is a picky person.

   By David Mc

7. After every breakfast Pete would ask his parents, for a mouse because he wanted one for ages but they never get him one. At breakfast every Saturday, he asked his parents if he could have the most wanted thing in the world – a white mouse, but the answer’s always no.

8. There is a little girl called Jackie and she always looks in a skip at the end of the estate for stuff for her flat with her mum. She really wants her own horse but they don’t have enough money so she can’t afford one because they are to poor.

9. You have repeated yourself in this summary where you could have written more about what happened.

10. Good David although I would have liked you to mention Mr Skip.

11. Well done David, you obviously thought this through.

12. Good summary although I think you should have mentioned mr Skip.

13. Good try, I would have liked you to say a little bit about what is happening in the book.

14. Good try, I would have liked you to say what has happened in the book not just how you felt about it.

15. Good but you have missed out the major find and what the story is all about, Mr Skip.

16. I get the impression that you really liked this book. You worked well with Sam well done.

17. hi miss ps I get cake yummy mmmmm its got lots of sweets on it

18. Thank you Miss Philp Smith, that is some could complements on how we should put a bit more imformation in our 50 words!

    🙂 Abby 🙂