Claire was taking her dog for a walk in the dark creepy woods. It was stormy and the trees were snapping down in the wind. Suddenly it began to snow and Claire caught some snow on her tongue. It was getting darker by the minute and the snow was getting heavier and heavier. It was like a twister. Her mum came to get her and her legs were shaking. She was petrified. The snow was going in Claire’s eyes and she couldn’t see where she was going. Finally Claire and her mum managed to reach home.
By Ben Penman and Codae Kerr
That was a great story if I was to mark you out of 10 it would be 10 out of 10!
Codie and Ben you story was good and impressive. from Roxie and Rhys
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We like your story. You wrote in sentences.By Callum and Rebecca
that was a great story im going to give you 101 out of 16.
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