Friday 1st May – Literacy

Sentence Editing and Uplevelling

Can you improve these sentences by editing and uplevelling them using punctuation, ambitious words and conjunctions (connectives)? The best sentences contain all of these elements and have correct spelling.

  1. My sister is bad.
  2. I feel hungry.
  3. The girl is nice
  4. i like to eat cakes.
  5. We can see a car.
  6. Stop running now
  7. I seen a ship sailing
  8. smash went the glass.

Conjunctions are words like: because, when, and, so, but, then.

Punctuation includes: ! ? , . Aa “ “

Ambitious words can be: fantastic, wondering, enormous, beautiful, adventure (there are many more).

A thesaurus can also help with this task. A free online version can be found here:           https://www.thesaurus.com/

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