For homework we had to make our sentences much better using connectives .

1.In Feburay i sometimes go to my dance teacher competition.

1.In Feburay i go to my dance teachers competition but i don’t go all the time .

2.In the winter i always get a bad cough

2.When winter comes i get a really bad cough and its very sore.

3.Once when i when to a competition they were always announcing my dance schools name because we where always winning .

3.Once when i went to a competition my dance school were always being announced because we kept winning and my dance teacher was very happy .

4.After careful analysis he decided not to go.

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5.I like to seperate my pens and pencils

5.When i sort out my pens and pencils i like to seperate them into different parts.