For homework we had to make our sentences much better using connectives .
1.In Feburay i sometimes go to my dance teacher competition.
1.In Feburay i go to my dance teachers competition but i don’t go all the time .
2.In the winter i always get a bad cough
2.When winter comes i get a really bad cough and its very sore.
3.Once when i when to a competition they were always announcing my dance schools name because we where always winning .
3.Once when i went to a competition my dance school were always being announced because we kept winning and my dance teacher was very happy .
4.After careful analysis he decided not to go.
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5.I like to seperate my pens and pencils
5.When i sort out my pens and pencils i like to seperate them into different parts.