The Stoor Worm
The Old Man of Hoy is a beautiful place with a lovely mountain, beach ,and a stack that looks like an old man.The water is as blue as a blueberry. It is freezing so cold if you didn’t have a jacket you would feel like an ice cream. It has nice rocky mountains, grassy plains, and a lovely beach. This is a wonderful place to go visit or even maybe go camping.
Then as fast as the speed of light a sound Is heard. A sound that could wake up anyone even with Its breath It looked bigger than the moon. It Was The Stoor Worm! A creature that looked like It was from a scary book. Minutes before the ocean started to sink, the water exploded like a volcano then came The Stoor Worm.
So now with people stuck In the ocean they have to somehow go faster than the wind. Then It went back down but when It went down It caused a giant splash that is now causing a tsunami that Is flying towards them like super man (“I knew fishing here wasn’t a good Idea! Said a fisherman Slowly It starts creeping towards them. A nice day turns Into a dreich day.
The wave was broken as The Stoor Worm crashed Into It. Yes that’s correct! Its so giant, It can stop a wave. The Stoor Worm’s mouth opens wide and spears towards them with Its devilish eyes [“I dinnae Ken what’s going on, I just woke up,”said another fisherman.] It crashes Into the Old Man Of Hoy but It starts glowing purple and then… It blows up! The Stoor Worm goes back but with Its massive body size It didn’t get pushed over. Inside of the old man of hoy was a silver sword that looked like It was made of clouds. The fishermen knew what they had to do. Stab It!
A fisherman picked up the sword and was ready to end The Stoor Worm. They jammed 2 boats together and waited for The Stoor Worm. Then it was the crashing sound again. It was back!. They launch the fisherman with the sword then BOOM! A giant explosion was made it looked bigger than the sun.The fisherman survived and fell into the deep blue water unlike The Stoor Worm that started to glow purple. It lets out the most frightening scream. Then it dissolved into dust.Then 2 months later they go back out to sea to get more fish for the winter but then the ocean started to rumble…
What thrilling piece of writing Ewan, great work 😄