Category: Writing

Over the last few weeks, we have all created a pet monster. This week for writing, we started to describe our character. We only focused on how our character looks this week but next time we will start to describe its personality too.  Once we had finished,  we paired up and read our partner’s writing. We highlighted the bits in their description we thought were really good and peer assessed. Then, some of us read our writing to the class and they gave us  feedback, telling us what they thought was good about our writing and what we could do better next time. Here are some pictures of us reading our writing to our class. Our star writer’s pieces are a few posts below :).

 

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Our Star Writers this week are Maisie, Ella, Jessica and Bruce.  Here are our character descriptions:

Maisie’s Monster

My monster’s name is Colourboller because it is full of colour. Colourboller is the fluffiest monster in the whole world. She has a beautiful multicoloured belly and her lovely pink cheeks look like cookies. She has a great round body and is very very cute. Her eyes are a nice purple eye colour. She has shiny round teeth and her mouth shines brighter than a burning fire. Her legs are so small and her hands are brighter than blueberries. On her hands you will find four spikes. She is holding a sword and a magic setter. She has beautiful wings and black reindeer horns.

Bruce’s Monster

My monster is called Ryin. Ryin is a bit cheeky but very very funny. Ryin likes sport and he is very good at it because he is very tall. He has a shiny orange face like a chocolate orange wrapper. On each arm he has really spiky red claws. He has four shiny eyes. He has small, fat legs. He has one lonely bit of hair and he always wears a red cap. He has a really sharp nose with a big moustache with sharp, big ears. Finally, he has a fluffy orange tummy and all over his tummy he has spikes which are as sharp as a knife.

 

Ella’s and Jessica’s will be added on Monday 🙂