This week we have been continuing our work on descriptive paragraphs.

We have been learning to use similes, alliteration and descriptive phrases in our writing.

We have also been working on editing and redrafting our work. We have been using a ‘tickled pink’ and ‘green for growth’ system to edit our work before getting the chance to type up a final copy.

We all chose a piece of text that we are currently working on to share with you this week. Look out for the finished piece!

Can you spot any quality pieces of description in our work so far?