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Thank you
Miss Philp Smith

Add your edited stories in the comments.

I hope you are all keeping warm and are enjoying the snow.

Challenge for today
Can you write a sentence, that makes sense, full of ‘ie’ sound words.
Build a snowman and take or draw a picture of it, you can email it to me or bring it in when we are back.

Most importantly stay safe and have fun.

Hi Miss P.S how are you? Today I made cupcakes, went sledging and swimming

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Hello P5/20

I hope you are staying safe and enjoying your day. Tasks, if you would like to, for the snow day are . . . .
1. Write an exciting snowy adventure.
2. Can you create a matching game for 3D and 2D shapes, ie the match would be a description of the shape and a picture of the shape.
3. Play the games on the links section of this blog.
4. Read your ‘horrible’ book.
5. Have fun, tell me what you’ve been up to in a comment!

I can use clever ways of getting description into my story.
I can create an exciting adventure story.

Assessment criteria
The story has lots of clever description that adds meaning to the story.
The story is exciting.
The story has capital letters and full stops in the correct places.
The story has paragraphs which help make the story make sense.
The story makes sense all the way through.

I can create an interesting story with excellent description of settings and characters.

Self assessment on the piece
1. Is the story interesting?
2. Have you used up levelled wow words?
3. Have described the characters?
4. Have you described the setting?
5. Does the story make sense all the way through?