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Frosty the snowmans big adventure
One cold morning Frosty the snowman woke up, he was in his spotty pink pyjamas, Frosty’s carrot nose was wiggling with excitment because he had just had a fantastic dream about going on an adventure! Frosty decided that, today Monday the 4th of November, he was going on an adventure greater than any other adventure in the entire world! Frosty was trembling with excitment so he got up and got on his blue jeans and orange stripy shirt. Then he found his plain black hat and plopped it on his head.
When Frosty set of he decided at first he would head for the sea. Norwall was there to greet him “Hi Frosty where are you of to?” Norwall asked “Im going on the greatest adventure of all time” Frosty replied with great excitment. “wow” said Norwall “Good luck!” “thanks” said Frosty and he jumped onto a floating iceberg” take me to a magical place” Frosty cried and the iceberg set of.
Suddenly the iceberg came to a grinding halt, Frosty pulled out a map and checked where they were.” Huh” Frosty gasped ” I must be on the lost island of TAMARID wow wow wow wow, no ones been here for years” he exclaimed “this really is the greatest adventure of all time”
He started to walk across the island, suddenly a green vine swooped down and grabed him by the ancle and lifted him into the air “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” screamed Frosty, he grabbed his bow and arrow an hit the vine and it shrunk back into the huge tree.
“This is scary” thought Frosty but then he rembered that he was an adventurer and he was never scared so he set off down Greater Tamarid. He started to enjoy himself, well after all it was a nice island. Oh no his thoughts had been interupted by the sound of loud snoring!!!! When he looked round the corner he saw about 16 Jaguars lying sleeping with green vines stroking them gently!
“I musn’t make a sound or else the Jaguars will awake” thought Frosty when suddenly at the most inapropriet time he sneezed a loud echoing sneeze. The biggest Jaguar awoke and growled a low angry growl and pounced, Frosty waited for the claws to scrath him but they didnt as a giant green vine scooped him up, making the Jaguar growl so Frosty ran away.
Thats enough adventure for one day thougt Frosty and he jumped on the iceberg and it took him back home, where he had a good long sleep.
by Alex and Lewis
One Christmas eve Santa was busy mucking out the reindeer. When Santa was finished doing his chores he went to his magnificent work shop to have a look at his speceal Christmas computer for emailsanta.com. Suddenly an evelope popped up on the screen it was a letter from Logan and all the other details for the following: my name is logan. I am already 09 years old. I live in the united Kindom i bet you knew that Santa.i now live in the town of Turriff. there is 1 more question to ask you
would you like to see him live and give you a letter back?
or just resive a letter.
Santa quikly done his chimney exersizes ‘ up down up down’. Rodolf slyly asked is santa and all the reindeer could do there sleigh practise for going away that night.before you could blink it was time to go to deliver presents.After a while he and all the reindeer was soon in Turriff the first house they went to logans house to deliver all the Christmas presents Logan and all his brothers and sisters would like exept for a couple of ones logan hates but the rest were all perfect. The next morning logan and all his family rushed down stairs to the livingroom. Logan ran to his stocking to see how many presents he got . But his sistergot more then everybody. Logan got the hamster that he desperetly wanted for years and years, the year has finally arrived.
logan and georgia
Santa’s Missing Hat
One snowy night Santa was having his scrumtious chocolate cookies and warm milk, while lounging on his sofa.
Santa has a silky white beard, a fluffy red buttoned coat, which has a black belt wrapped round his waist. He also has a cosy red hat with a furry pompom on top but sadly it has gone missing!
“I don’t know where to find it” sighed Santa, sipping his glass of warm milk. He went to his cuddily bed worrying about his hat. Santa could’nt sleep just because of his silky red hat.
The next morning Santa woke up and got dressed. Then he poured his cereral into a bowl. Then he shouted for all his wonderful elves to go looking for his red hat. First Santa went to look in the icey Penguin Circle. Unfortuatly there was no sign of his hat so he went to look the frosty Snowman Cave. There was also no luck in the cold cave. Finally Santa flew to the Polar Bear Island. In the distance Santa saw a red furry hat on the evil doctor Pola’s head. Santa dashed over he demanded for his hat back, but Pola would’nt give it back. Eventually Santa got his magic hat back from Pola. Then safely flew back to his spectacular workshop. Immediatly he shouted out to the elves that he had his hat back. “I’ve found my hat, come and see”. Santa said jumping up and down. “Yipee” screamed Santa. That night Santa had no more worrying to do and Santa got a very good sleep.
The End
By Robert and Sophie
frosty the snowman
Once upon a time there was a snowman called frosty the snowman.One day frosty started to melt everybody started to panic eceshilly santa.Santa is olredy plaing his andvencher to find the poshen to save his live.The next day santa was paking his bags once he had finshed paking he went down stare to get a cup of coco and took it on his sligh.And he went to his trusty elf`s and then shot off away in his sligh spilling his lovely cup of coco.The fist place he we was the south pole to look for the sorce of the 115. They finely find it but that is not the end of the adveture. He put up a cossey blue tent then he went to bed. The next Morning he went back on the adventure to the pirimid water of egypt them they went to the pirimed and looked and they find it they have finished the poshion . They go back home to frosty and go in to the gigantic freeser and poor the poshion on him and he grose back to live and meets his frends at school and has a laugh!
By Gregor and Cally
Rudolph loeses his nose.
One day when the raindeer were for christmas, Rudolph got tangled in his reins and he fell to the ground. “Rudolph,Rudolph,Rudolph!” cried the others.
“You’ve lost your bright red nose!”
They were so woried about him they sent out a search party.”What are we going to do.” said Santa on the day before christmas.
“How about we look for it are self.” said Mrs. Claus.
They climbed into the sleigh and set off.
“Where do you think it could be.” asked Mrs. Cllaus.
“Look over there.” replied Santa.
In a cave a bright red flash came from it. They turned around the sleigh and went to the cave.
“I think it’s Rudolphs nose.” said Santa hopefuly.
“I hope to.” replied Mrs. Claus.
When they were at the front of the cave they sliped out of the sleigh.
“RUN!” they heard someone said.
“Listen.” said Santa but they all heard.
They ran into the cave with a bright lantern. They squinted into the darkness.
“Look over there.” wisperd one of the raindeer.
In the gloomy darkness. They could see a bright red flash.
“Come on lets get it!” shouted Santa.
They chased the red flashing light.
“Got you.” said one of the raindeer.
They had caught his nose! They were so happy that they did not know that tomorrow was christmas day.
The next day they set off for christmas.
The End
By Jasmine and Josh
Snow Buddies
One morning in Turriff, 5 golden retrevers came sprinting out of their houses with their favourite balls, and ran to the den! As soon as they got there they all hudled together in the middle of the den and put there balls in the center of the cyrcle. After that butterball cought a glims of a dillivery van. But it wasn’t just a dillivery van, it was an ice cream dillivery van! Butterball shoulted, ICE CREAM! Butterball ran into the van and started stufing his mouth with ice cream. The others ran into the van to save him, but as soon as they got in the man came back and shut the door without noticing the pups!!!
6 hours later, they were all fast asleep not knowing that they were in an airoplain on their way to Alaska! Suddenly the puppys woke up. Where are we? criyed Rosebud. I have not a clue! mumbbled B dog. Just as the sky started to go a bit dark, the ice cream dillivery droped! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH! They screamed, BUMP! Suddenly they landed. The door fell open and they fell out! I AM FREEEZING! criyed ROSEBUD. At night they all shivered across the snow and came to a shed. May be we could stay there for the night, wispered B dog. So the pups ran into the shed and got cumfterable.
That houses shed belonged to a boy called Adom with his mum and dad and his dog Chesta. In the morning Adom got up and went out to the shed with Chesta. Chesta heard something! It was rumiling in the tools area, but before Adom could have a look his mom shouted, Adom time for school! So Adom ran out to the car. Chesta went to have a look at what was moveing beside the tools! Suddenly Chesta saw the 5 pups underneath a blanket. Who are you? Chesta said. My name is rosebud and this is the rest of the gang! A few hours later, Adom came back! Chesta shouted, quick hide!
Adom came rushing in, Chesta were are you? he criyed, Chesta ran out and barked for the 5 pups to come out! As soon as Adom saw the 5 puppys he shouted, finally my wish has came true!!! Because Adom had always wanted to take part in the snow events, when you have to have 6 dogs in front of the sliege and the person at the back. Adom said that know he can take part and he might win! so after a couple of days Adom made the geer and shouted, lets get started so they practesed and practesed and practesed and finally he snow events was here!!! So that day Adom said, go guys i know you can do it! so the man shoulted, ON YOUR MARCS, GET SET, GOOOO! So Adom shoultd left then right and then left! Soon Adom saw that he was getting closer to the finish line and he WON!!!! Every one was happy and after a couple of days the pups did get home and lived happy for the rest of thier lives!
By Abby and Jack
Oh no i hope frosty the snow man hasen’t melted!!! 🙂
The stories sound magnificent!
Sophie
abby and jack are really intresting
cally and gregors is really exciting
All the stories are extremly amazing
“awesome well done !!
lewis you really tried hard. WELL DONE!!!!
Georgia remember your capital letters and spelling apart from that it is really good.WELL DONE!!!!!
josh hope that they wont loose Rudolf nose again. AWESOME!!!!!
Abby sounds very much like the movie but anyway well done. I LOVE IT!!!!!
All the stories are great, RESULT!!!!
Josh
Really enjoyed Snow Buddies 🙂
Me and Josh made a mistake in the first sentance it’s meant to be: One day when the raindeer were praticing for christmas,
I think they were great 🙂
great stories guys really looking forward on seeing the rest of them <3
I think that P5/20 have done very good job and cant wait to read the rest of the magical winter stories. 🙂
ACE story primary 5\20 cool Jagwars in the story
Alex&Lewies evrybody did so well !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CAITLIN G:):(::):|:) *
thanks caitlin Gand Katrena and well done to everyone they were brilliant, Abbys had description, Joshs was exciting and in sophies and callys you wanted to know what was going to happen next welll done everyone give your selfs a pat on the back!!!!!!! o:)
Santa loses some presents
The cold night before Christmas Santa was drinking his cup of coco when he got a call from the elf’s saying that as soon as they put the presents in the sleigh they just disappeared. Santa said he would be down in a minute. The elf’s were very worried because they thought if they could not get the presents to stay in the sleigh how would Santa deliver all the presents. They took out the machine that could lift the sleigh and found that there was a hole in the bottom of it. They were all very upset but relieved that they had found the problem.
The decided to mend the sleigh and then put all the presents back it. However the same thing happened again! The presents went into the sleigh and then just disappeared, this was very strange! They had an other look under the sleigh, what could be happening they thought?
Suddenly they heard a naughty giggle. Where was that coming from? Suddenly they realised that someone was in the same room they thought who it could be. They then thought about frosty the bad guy. Then they realised that he had powers and he had an invisible cloak! They all screamed and ran out of the room.
Suddenly Santa remembered that he had got an other sleigh in case that the first one broke. He phoned all the elf’s and told them about the sleigh. Soon they put the other sleigh in a different room so that frosty the bad guy didn’t know that they had a different sleigh.
It was getting closer to Christmas and all the elf’s were busy carefully putting the amazing presents in the sleigh. Everyone was sleeping in they’re beds. Santa was going to leave any minute now the elf’s were dancing with joy. Santa was off he went to the first house. By the time that Santa had dropped of all the presents Rudolf was full up with carrots. Santa was full up with milk and mince pies. So full up he had a sleep in the sleigh on the way back.
By Katrena and Jay
Santa is ill!
It was a day until Christmas Eve and Santa was sitting infront of the fire warming his feet when suddenly he felt sick. He started sneezing, caughing and he started to begin to feel really sick! Mrs clause came dashing through, “What has happened to you”? ” I think I might have a fever Mrs Claus” “But its Christmas Eve tommorow you cant be ill, How are you going to deliver all the marvellous presents to the brilliantly behaved children tomorrow night”? Mrs Claus went back through to the kitchen to see if she could find any medicine to help santa get better. She rumeged and racked through the cupboards but she only found reindeer medicine, Which was used to help Rudolph get better when he was little. “We are going to have to go on a search” Mrs Claus explained. So they searched the house up and down, First they looked in the living room. There was only eleve medicine in there which made you go tiny! Next they looked up stair. they looked in the bedrooms first, there was clothes, scarfs, gloves, hats and cheese but there was no medicine in there.Then they checked the spare bedroom, There was medicine in there but not the one they needed. Last they checked the bathroom. “Its bound to have the medicine we need in here” Santa moaned.
They checked the cabnet, There was loads of medicine in there, there was tablets, calpol and loads more. But they needed a special medicine called feveraid. So they decide to go to Mary and
Lewis’ house to see if they had any. Mary and Lewis were their best friends. So they got their warm winter clothes on. They had their warm coats, fluffy hats, fuzzy gloves and their scarfs on ready to go to Mary and Lewis’ house. They streched the door open and set off. they knocked on mary’s door, they were offered to come in, so they did.they had a cup of coffee and a biscut. “What brings you here anyway”? “Well Santa is ill and we dont have any feveraid and we wondered if you had some”? “No we dont have any, sorry”. mary said. “Dont worry, We will go and find some medicine”. So they set off for another journey. So they got wrapped up and set off. They strolled acroos the icy grund to the groovy igloo. “They are bound to have some of the feveraid in here surely”. When they finally got to the groovy igloo they went up to the desk to see if they had any. They also got a drink of fizzy juice and a sweetie. “Hello. santa said. “We were wondereing if you have any feveraid”? “We did, the ,man who just came in bought the last one”. So santa and mrs claus ran out the door trying to find the man who bought it. Quickly they ran around trying to find the man that bought it. they looked and looked and looked but they just could not find the man. Unfortunatly they gave up and went home because it began to get super cold. they got home and hung up their coats,hats and scarfs and they put their gloves on the reidiator. “DING DONG” Went the door. Mrs Claus ran to the door to see who it was. ” Hello, here is some feveraid for Santa. said Lewis. “Oh thank you so much”. Mrs Claus said cheerily. “Santa”. Mrs Claus called. “Lewis has some feveraid for you”. Santa darted through. ” Oh thank you very much”. said Santa. And he took the bottle and had a sip. Suddenly santa felt much, much better. The next day which Christmas eve, santa felt much better. He set off at night and gave the presents to the very well behaved children. and santa managed to deliver all the presents and everyone was happy.
by Scott and Alisha
the missing present
One snowy Christmas eve the elfs were working very hard loading up the sleigh. While Santa was puting on his best Christmas suit. The reindeer were waiting very paiently in they’re stables getting ready to pull the sliegh that night . After Santa had his best Christmas suit on he went out and got all the reindeer ready. The elfs were counting down 5 4 3 2 1 0 its Christmas eve wahoo Santa and the reindeer took off. All the elfs were cheering Go Santa. Santa said first stop here we come. Santa got the bag of presants and went down the chimney he found a mince pie, some beer and a carrot for Rudolf lying on the fluffy carpet next to the lovely decorated Christmas tree. After he had put all the presents under the
Christmas tree. Santa was eating his mince pie and his glass of beer and he took the carrot in his pocket for rudolf. Soon they were of to the next house it was Santa’s favourite house he went down a dusty chimney and he went over to the Christmas tree. He put his hand into the bag but there was no present for them. What was Santa going to do ? Santa went to all the other houses and diliverd the presents. Then he went back to the north pole to get the present but it was all most day light so he rushed back to the house as quick as he could and diliverd the presents just in time. Looking throw the window to see the children opening the presents. Santa rid back home on his riendeer and had a long nap.While the riendeer were eating all the carrorts that they got on christmas eve The elfs were watching the children opening the present on chistmas day.
by caitlin and Ellie
i like the stoirys
The night before Christmas
Amy and Jordan, two nine year olds, were trying to go to sleep the night before Christmas. They had an exciting day and were not tired. They kept on rolling round and around in thier beds. Suddenly they heard a crash. They both raced downstairs. It was Santa! He was stuck in the tree and he had fairy lights wrapped around him. Amy and Jordan unwrapped him and he jumped down from the tree.
”Thank you for rescuing me,” said Santa politely.
” Your welcome,” whispered Amy and Jordan.
”Do you want to come on my sleigh with me?” asked Santa.
”Yes please,” replied Jordan.
So Santa threw some magic dust over the three of them. Suddenly they were in Santa’s sleigh. It was amazing. There was red cloth seats and the whole sleigh was red. There was gold bars to hold on to and the reigns were gold. When they were up in the air Amy felt a bit scared so Santa sat her on his knee. Jordan was not scared. When they landed Jordan ran out of the door of the sleigh and suddenly stopped.
”Where is this?” he asked Santa.
”This is Toy land,” answered Santa.
It was amazing. There was toyshops everywhere in different shapes and sizes. Amy jumped out and ran looking at all the toys in the shop windows. She stopped at a doll shop. In the window was the most prettiest doll she ever saw.
”Oh,” she said. I really love this doll”.
”Well you can have it if you want,” said Santa.
So Santa went in the shop and came out with the doll.
”Here you go Amy,” said Santa giving her the doll.
”Can I get this toy robot?” asked Jordan.
”Of course,” said Santa.
So Santa went and got the toy robot for Jonathon. Jonathon loved it. He put it on and it waddled around like a duck. They walked around Toy land for a while looking at the toys. Suddenly they came to a sweet shop. Santa went in and bought Amy and Jordan’s favourite sweet. They ate the sweet eagerly. After a bit they began to feel tired. They went back to the sleigh. They were really sleepy. They flew back to Turriff. They spotted thier little house, with its red roof. Santa landed his sleigh and carryed them inside. He layed them in thier seperate comfy beds and tucked a little bell in thier pockets. When Amy and Jordan woke up the next morning they had a little surprise in thier pockets.
Can you guess?
Niamh and Lee
I like all of the storys well done!
By Jasmine and JOSH 🙂
I think our class should be very proud because these stories are AMAZING !
The Primary 1 kids are sure to love them . 🙂
great stories everyone and the little ones will absolutely love them
every ones stories where exiting & amazing
well done everyone
:.o
katie
I think the little ones will love them to! 🙂 ! 🙂
i love all the stories 😀
the little ones will love the stories 😀
they sure will adore them 🙂
Lovely comments and fab stories. I hope you enjoyed working in pairs I think it worked really well and I have been impressed with how you edited the stories. Well done everyone I am sure that P1 and going to love them.
Frosty the snowmans big adventure
One cold morning Frosty the snowman woke up, he was in his spotty pink pyjamas, Frosty’s carrot nose was wiggling with excitment because he had just had a fantastic dream about going on an adventure! Frosty decided that, today Monday the 4th of November, he was going on an adventure greater than any other adventure in the entire world! Frosty was trembling with excitment so he got up and got on his blue jeans and orange stripy shirt. Then he found his plain black hat and plopped it on his head.
When Frosty set of he decided at first he would head for the sea. Norwall was there to greet him “Hi Frosty where are you of to?” Norwall asked “Im going on the greatest adventure of all time” Frosty replied with great excitment. “wow” said Norwall “Good luck!” “thanks” said Frosty and he jumped onto a floating iceberg” take me to a magical place” Frosty cried and the iceberg set of.
Suddenly the iceberg came to a grinding halt, Frosty pulled out a map and checked where they were.” Huh” Frosty gasped ” I must be on the lost island of TAMARID wow wow wow wow, no ones been here for years” he exclaimed “this really is the greatest adventure of all time”
He started to walk across the island, suddenly a green vine swooped down and grabed him by the ancle and lifted him into the air “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” screamed Frosty, he grabbed his bow and arrow an hit the vine and it shrunk back into the huge tree.
“This is scary” thought Frosty but then he rembered that he was an adventurer and he was never scared so he set off down Greater Tamarid. He started to enjoy himself, well after all it was a nice island. Oh no his thoughts had been interupted by the sound of loud snoring!!!! When he looked round the corner he saw about 16 Jaguars lying sleeping with green vines stroking them gently!
“I musn’t make a sound or else the Jaguars will awake” thought Frosty when suddenly at the most inapropriet time he sneezed a loud echoing sneeze. The biggest Jaguar awoke and growled a low angry growl and pounced, Frosty waited for the claws to scrath him but they didnt as a giant green vine scooped him up, making the Jaguar growl so Frosty ran away.
Thats enough adventure for one day thougt Frosty and he jumped on the iceberg and it took him back home, where he had a good long sleep.
by Alex and Lewis
One Christmas eve Santa was busy mucking out the reindeer. When Santa was finished doing his chores he went to his magnificent work shop to have a look at his speceal Christmas computer for emailsanta.com. Suddenly an evelope popped up on the screen it was a letter from Logan and all the other details for the following: my name is logan. I am already 09 years old. I live in the united Kindom i bet you knew that Santa.i now live in the town of Turriff. there is 1 more question to ask you
would you like to see him live and give you a letter back?
or just resive a letter.
Santa quikly done his chimney exersizes ‘ up down up down’. Rodolf slyly asked is santa and all the reindeer could do there sleigh practise for going away that night.before you could blink it was time to go to deliver presents.After a while he and all the reindeer was soon in Turriff the first house they went to logans house to deliver all the Christmas presents Logan and all his brothers and sisters would like exept for a couple of ones logan hates but the rest were all perfect. The next morning logan and all his family rushed down stairs to the livingroom. Logan ran to his stocking to see how many presents he got . But his sistergot more then everybody. Logan got the hamster that he desperetly wanted for years and years, the year has finally arrived.
logan and georgia
Santa’s Missing Hat
One snowy night Santa was having his scrumtious chocolate cookies and warm milk, while lounging on his sofa.
Santa has a silky white beard, a fluffy red buttoned coat, which has a black belt wrapped round his waist. He also has a cosy red hat with a furry pompom on top but sadly it has gone missing!
“I don’t know where to find it” sighed Santa, sipping his glass of warm milk. He went to his cuddily bed worrying about his hat. Santa could’nt sleep just because of his silky red hat.
The next morning Santa woke up and got dressed. Then he poured his cereral into a bowl. Then he shouted for all his wonderful elves to go looking for his red hat. First Santa went to look in the icey Penguin Circle. Unfortuatly there was no sign of his hat so he went to look the frosty Snowman Cave. There was also no luck in the cold cave. Finally Santa flew to the Polar Bear Island. In the distance Santa saw a red furry hat on the evil doctor Pola’s head. Santa dashed over he demanded for his hat back, but Pola would’nt give it back. Eventually Santa got his magic hat back from Pola. Then safely flew back to his spectacular workshop. Immediatly he shouted out to the elves that he had his hat back. “I’ve found my hat, come and see”. Santa said jumping up and down. “Yipee” screamed Santa. That night Santa had no more worrying to do and Santa got a very good sleep.
The End
By Robert and Sophie
frosty the snowman
Once upon a time there was a snowman called frosty the snowman.One day frosty started to melt everybody started to panic eceshilly santa.Santa is olredy plaing his andvencher to find the poshen to save his live.The next day santa was paking his bags once he had finshed paking he went down stare to get a cup of coco and took it on his sligh.And he went to his trusty elf`s and then shot off away in his sligh spilling his lovely cup of coco.The fist place he we was the south pole to look for the sorce of the 115. They finely find it but that is not the end of the adveture. He put up a cossey blue tent then he went to bed. The next Morning he went back on the adventure to the pirimid water of egypt them they went to the pirimed and looked and they find it they have finished the poshion . They go back home to frosty and go in to the gigantic freeser and poor the poshion on him and he grose back to live and meets his frends at school and has a laugh!
By Gregor and Cally
Rudolph loeses his nose.
One day when the raindeer were for christmas, Rudolph got tangled in his reins and he fell to the ground. “Rudolph,Rudolph,Rudolph!” cried the others.
“You’ve lost your bright red nose!”
They were so woried about him they sent out a search party.”What are we going to do.” said Santa on the day before christmas.
“How about we look for it are self.” said Mrs. Claus.
They climbed into the sleigh and set off.
“Where do you think it could be.” asked Mrs. Cllaus.
“Look over there.” replied Santa.
In a cave a bright red flash came from it. They turned around the sleigh and went to the cave.
“I think it’s Rudolphs nose.” said Santa hopefuly.
“I hope to.” replied Mrs. Claus.
When they were at the front of the cave they sliped out of the sleigh.
“RUN!” they heard someone said.
“Listen.” said Santa but they all heard.
They ran into the cave with a bright lantern. They squinted into the darkness.
“Look over there.” wisperd one of the raindeer.
In the gloomy darkness. They could see a bright red flash.
“Come on lets get it!” shouted Santa.
They chased the red flashing light.
“Got you.” said one of the raindeer.
They had caught his nose! They were so happy that they did not know that tomorrow was christmas day.
The next day they set off for christmas.
The End
By Jasmine and Josh
Snow Buddies
One morning in Turriff, 5 golden retrevers came sprinting out of their houses with their favourite balls, and ran to the den! As soon as they got there they all hudled together in the middle of the den and put there balls in the center of the cyrcle. After that butterball cought a glims of a dillivery van. But it wasn’t just a dillivery van, it was an ice cream dillivery van! Butterball shoulted, ICE CREAM! Butterball ran into the van and started stufing his mouth with ice cream. The others ran into the van to save him, but as soon as they got in the man came back and shut the door without noticing the pups!!!
6 hours later, they were all fast asleep not knowing that they were in an airoplain on their way to Alaska! Suddenly the puppys woke up. Where are we? criyed Rosebud. I have not a clue! mumbbled B dog. Just as the sky started to go a bit dark, the ice cream dillivery droped! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH! They screamed, BUMP! Suddenly they landed. The door fell open and they fell out! I AM FREEEZING! criyed ROSEBUD. At night they all shivered across the snow and came to a shed. May be we could stay there for the night, wispered B dog. So the pups ran into the shed and got cumfterable.
That houses shed belonged to a boy called Adom with his mum and dad and his dog Chesta. In the morning Adom got up and went out to the shed with Chesta. Chesta heard something! It was rumiling in the tools area, but before Adom could have a look his mom shouted, Adom time for school! So Adom ran out to the car. Chesta went to have a look at what was moveing beside the tools! Suddenly Chesta saw the 5 pups underneath a blanket. Who are you? Chesta said. My name is rosebud and this is the rest of the gang! A few hours later, Adom came back! Chesta shouted, quick hide!
Adom came rushing in, Chesta were are you? he criyed, Chesta ran out and barked for the 5 pups to come out! As soon as Adom saw the 5 puppys he shouted, finally my wish has came true!!! Because Adom had always wanted to take part in the snow events, when you have to have 6 dogs in front of the sliege and the person at the back. Adom said that know he can take part and he might win! so after a couple of days Adom made the geer and shouted, lets get started so they practesed and practesed and practesed and finally he snow events was here!!! So that day Adom said, go guys i know you can do it! so the man shoulted, ON YOUR MARCS, GET SET, GOOOO! So Adom shoultd left then right and then left! Soon Adom saw that he was getting closer to the finish line and he WON!!!! Every one was happy and after a couple of days the pups did get home and lived happy for the rest of thier lives!
By Abby and Jack
Oh no i hope frosty the snow man hasen’t melted!!! 🙂
The stories sound magnificent!
Sophie
abby and jack are really intresting
cally and gregors is really exciting
All the stories are extremly amazing
“awesome well done !!
lewis you really tried hard. WELL DONE!!!!
Georgia remember your capital letters and spelling apart from that it is really good.WELL DONE!!!!!
josh hope that they wont loose Rudolf nose again. AWESOME!!!!!
Abby sounds very much like the movie but anyway well done. I LOVE IT!!!!!
All the stories are great, RESULT!!!!
Josh
Really enjoyed Snow Buddies 🙂
Me and Josh made a mistake in the first sentance it’s meant to be: One day when the raindeer were praticing for christmas,
I think they were great 🙂
great stories guys really looking forward on seeing the rest of them <3
I think that P5/20 have done very good job and cant wait to read the rest of the magical winter stories. 🙂
ACE story primary 5\20 cool Jagwars in the story
Alex&Lewies evrybody did so well !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CAITLIN G:):(::):|:) *
thanks caitlin Gand Katrena and well done to everyone they were brilliant, Abbys had description, Joshs was exciting and in sophies and callys you wanted to know what was going to happen next welll done everyone give your selfs a pat on the back!!!!!!! o:)
Santa loses some presents
The cold night before Christmas Santa was drinking his cup of coco when he got a call from the elf’s saying that as soon as they put the presents in the sleigh they just disappeared. Santa said he would be down in a minute. The elf’s were very worried because they thought if they could not get the presents to stay in the sleigh how would Santa deliver all the presents. They took out the machine that could lift the sleigh and found that there was a hole in the bottom of it. They were all very upset but relieved that they had found the problem.
The decided to mend the sleigh and then put all the presents back it. However the same thing happened again! The presents went into the sleigh and then just disappeared, this was very strange! They had an other look under the sleigh, what could be happening they thought?
Suddenly they heard a naughty giggle. Where was that coming from? Suddenly they realised that someone was in the same room they thought who it could be. They then thought about frosty the bad guy. Then they realised that he had powers and he had an invisible cloak! They all screamed and ran out of the room.
Suddenly Santa remembered that he had got an other sleigh in case that the first one broke. He phoned all the elf’s and told them about the sleigh. Soon they put the other sleigh in a different room so that frosty the bad guy didn’t know that they had a different sleigh.
It was getting closer to Christmas and all the elf’s were busy carefully putting the amazing presents in the sleigh. Everyone was sleeping in they’re beds. Santa was going to leave any minute now the elf’s were dancing with joy. Santa was off he went to the first house. By the time that Santa had dropped of all the presents Rudolf was full up with carrots. Santa was full up with milk and mince pies. So full up he had a sleep in the sleigh on the way back.
By Katrena and Jay
Santa is ill!
It was a day until Christmas Eve and Santa was sitting infront of the fire warming his feet when suddenly he felt sick. He started sneezing, caughing and he started to begin to feel really sick! Mrs clause came dashing through, “What has happened to you”? ” I think I might have a fever Mrs Claus” “But its Christmas Eve tommorow you cant be ill, How are you going to deliver all the marvellous presents to the brilliantly behaved children tomorrow night”? Mrs Claus went back through to the kitchen to see if she could find any medicine to help santa get better. She rumeged and racked through the cupboards but she only found reindeer medicine, Which was used to help Rudolph get better when he was little. “We are going to have to go on a search” Mrs Claus explained. So they searched the house up and down, First they looked in the living room. There was only eleve medicine in there which made you go tiny! Next they looked up stair. they looked in the bedrooms first, there was clothes, scarfs, gloves, hats and cheese but there was no medicine in there.Then they checked the spare bedroom, There was medicine in there but not the one they needed. Last they checked the bathroom. “Its bound to have the medicine we need in here” Santa moaned.
They checked the cabnet, There was loads of medicine in there, there was tablets, calpol and loads more. But they needed a special medicine called feveraid. So they decide to go to Mary and
Lewis’ house to see if they had any. Mary and Lewis were their best friends. So they got their warm winter clothes on. They had their warm coats, fluffy hats, fuzzy gloves and their scarfs on ready to go to Mary and Lewis’ house. They streched the door open and set off. they knocked on mary’s door, they were offered to come in, so they did.they had a cup of coffee and a biscut. “What brings you here anyway”? “Well Santa is ill and we dont have any feveraid and we wondered if you had some”? “No we dont have any, sorry”. mary said. “Dont worry, We will go and find some medicine”. So they set off for another journey. So they got wrapped up and set off. They strolled acroos the icy grund to the groovy igloo. “They are bound to have some of the feveraid in here surely”. When they finally got to the groovy igloo they went up to the desk to see if they had any. They also got a drink of fizzy juice and a sweetie. “Hello. santa said. “We were wondereing if you have any feveraid”? “We did, the ,man who just came in bought the last one”. So santa and mrs claus ran out the door trying to find the man who bought it. Quickly they ran around trying to find the man that bought it. they looked and looked and looked but they just could not find the man. Unfortunatly they gave up and went home because it began to get super cold. they got home and hung up their coats,hats and scarfs and they put their gloves on the reidiator. “DING DONG” Went the door. Mrs Claus ran to the door to see who it was. ” Hello, here is some feveraid for Santa. said Lewis. “Oh thank you so much”. Mrs Claus said cheerily. “Santa”. Mrs Claus called. “Lewis has some feveraid for you”. Santa darted through. ” Oh thank you very much”. said Santa. And he took the bottle and had a sip. Suddenly santa felt much, much better. The next day which Christmas eve, santa felt much better. He set off at night and gave the presents to the very well behaved children. and santa managed to deliver all the presents and everyone was happy.
by Scott and Alisha
the missing present
One snowy Christmas eve the elfs were working very hard loading up the sleigh. While Santa was puting on his best Christmas suit. The reindeer were waiting very paiently in they’re stables getting ready to pull the sliegh that night . After Santa had his best Christmas suit on he went out and got all the reindeer ready. The elfs were counting down 5 4 3 2 1 0 its Christmas eve wahoo Santa and the reindeer took off. All the elfs were cheering Go Santa. Santa said first stop here we come. Santa got the bag of presants and went down the chimney he found a mince pie, some beer and a carrot for Rudolf lying on the fluffy carpet next to the lovely decorated Christmas tree. After he had put all the presents under the
Christmas tree. Santa was eating his mince pie and his glass of beer and he took the carrot in his pocket for rudolf. Soon they were of to the next house it was Santa’s favourite house he went down a dusty chimney and he went over to the Christmas tree. He put his hand into the bag but there was no present for them. What was Santa going to do ? Santa went to all the other houses and diliverd the presents. Then he went back to the north pole to get the present but it was all most day light so he rushed back to the house as quick as he could and diliverd the presents just in time. Looking throw the window to see the children opening the presents. Santa rid back home on his riendeer and had a long nap.While the riendeer were eating all the carrorts that they got on christmas eve The elfs were watching the children opening the present on chistmas day.
by caitlin and Ellie
i like the stoirys
The night before Christmas
Amy and Jordan, two nine year olds, were trying to go to sleep the night before Christmas. They had an exciting day and were not tired. They kept on rolling round and around in thier beds. Suddenly they heard a crash. They both raced downstairs. It was Santa! He was stuck in the tree and he had fairy lights wrapped around him. Amy and Jordan unwrapped him and he jumped down from the tree.
”Thank you for rescuing me,” said Santa politely.
” Your welcome,” whispered Amy and Jordan.
”Do you want to come on my sleigh with me?” asked Santa.
”Yes please,” replied Jordan.
So Santa threw some magic dust over the three of them. Suddenly they were in Santa’s sleigh. It was amazing. There was red cloth seats and the whole sleigh was red. There was gold bars to hold on to and the reigns were gold. When they were up in the air Amy felt a bit scared so Santa sat her on his knee. Jordan was not scared. When they landed Jordan ran out of the door of the sleigh and suddenly stopped.
”Where is this?” he asked Santa.
”This is Toy land,” answered Santa.
It was amazing. There was toyshops everywhere in different shapes and sizes. Amy jumped out and ran looking at all the toys in the shop windows. She stopped at a doll shop. In the window was the most prettiest doll she ever saw.
”Oh,” she said. I really love this doll”.
”Well you can have it if you want,” said Santa.
So Santa went in the shop and came out with the doll.
”Here you go Amy,” said Santa giving her the doll.
”Can I get this toy robot?” asked Jordan.
”Of course,” said Santa.
So Santa went and got the toy robot for Jonathon. Jonathon loved it. He put it on and it waddled around like a duck. They walked around Toy land for a while looking at the toys. Suddenly they came to a sweet shop. Santa went in and bought Amy and Jordan’s favourite sweet. They ate the sweet eagerly. After a bit they began to feel tired. They went back to the sleigh. They were really sleepy. They flew back to Turriff. They spotted thier little house, with its red roof. Santa landed his sleigh and carryed them inside. He layed them in thier seperate comfy beds and tucked a little bell in thier pockets. When Amy and Jordan woke up the next morning they had a little surprise in thier pockets.
Can you guess?
Niamh and Lee
I like all of the storys well done!
By Jasmine and JOSH 🙂
I think our class should be very proud because these stories are AMAZING !
The Primary 1 kids are sure to love them . 🙂
great stories everyone and the little ones will absolutely love them
every ones stories where exiting & amazing
well done everyone
:.o
katie
I think the little ones will love them to! 🙂 ! 🙂
i love all the stories 😀
the little ones will love the stories 😀
they sure will adore them 🙂
Lovely comments and fab stories. I hope you enjoyed working in pairs I think it worked really well and I have been impressed with how you edited the stories. Well done everyone I am sure that P1 and going to love them.