Good morning P4b.\u00a0 Your first task this morning is a piece of Writing.\u00a0 I would like you to write a story about “The Brave Dog”.\u00a0 You can use your imagination to write a story where a dog does something really brave.\u00a0 Does it save you from a dangerous situation?\u00a0 Does it stop a crime?\u00a0 Your success criteria is this:\u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 1.\u00a0 Your story should contain 5 sentences which make me go wow!\u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 2.\u00a0 Your story should contain 5 joining words which are high quality (not just and or because)\u00a0 You can use a thesaurus to help\u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a0 \u00a03.\u00a0 Your story should describe what’s happening using the 5 senses.\u00a0 What can you see?\u00a0 What can you hear?\u00a0 What can you touch?\u00a0 What can you smell?\u00a0 What can you taste?\u00a0 For example, if your dog is rescuing someone from a fire, you would hear people shouting, you would smell the smoke etc.\u00a0 Your job is to use describing words to make your story really exciting to read.<\/p>\n
You can post your finished stories to your own profiles or send them to me through the school email address:\u00a0 wlstjohnogilvie-ps@westlothian.org.uk\u00a0 \u00a0 If you are writing them in your jotter, you could take a picture and send it.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Good morning P4b.\u00a0 Your first task this morning is a piece of Writing.\u00a0 I would like you to write a story about “The Brave Dog”.\u00a0 You can use your imagination to write a story where a dog does something really … Continue reading