The Grumpy Rhino by Logan
One day I went to the zoo and I saw a really grumpy rhino that was scaring all the other animals. The rhino was so bored he charged at a buffalo. The buffalo charged too because the rhino wanted to steal his water. BANG! The battle was on! The other animals were shouting at them saying “stop the fight!”
I ran to the zoo keeper and he stopped the fight. When the grumpy rhino realised what he had done he became a really nice rhino. I said, “that was nice.”
That is a very good story.
Lovely story.
That’s a really good story. Me and my friends thought it was good to.
I love the story.It is funny you could never get tired of it!
WELL DONE LOGAN!