{"id":581,"date":"2017-01-31T17:41:14","date_gmt":"2017-01-31T16:41:14","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/wl\/StJosephsPS\/?p=581"},"modified":"2017-01-31T17:41:14","modified_gmt":"2017-01-31T16:41:14","slug":"primary-45","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/wl\/StJosephsPS\/2017\/01\/31\/primary-45\/","title":{"rendered":"Primary 4\/5"},"content":{"rendered":"

Primary 4\/5 have been learning to up-level their writing and make it even better. \u00a0We all wrote a newspaper article last week to report the Apollo 11 moon landing. The teacher\u00a0read every one and provided feedback to everyone. \u00a0Mrs Cree\u00a0pointed out things that she\u00a0liked and things than could be improved upon.<\/p>\n

The first thing we had to do was read over our original report. \u00a0We then looked at the feedback from the teacher. \u00a0As we were re-drafting, we were encouraged to make changes to our writing. \u00a0Some of us even made changes that weren’t suggested by Mrs Cree.<\/p>\n