This week in writing some of us did a piece of work entitled ‘Through the Keyhole.’ We had to imagine that we were peeking through a keyhole and we had to describe what we could see inside a room. Here is some of our writing:

Kai

The room is a living room. I can see flowers. I can see toys. The wallpaper is blue. On the wall is a black mirror.

Evan

It is a living room. I can see a couch. The walls are blue. There is a tv.

Emma

It is a bedroom. I can see a bed. The walls have red spots on a blue background.

Sophie

I can see a big bedroom. It has pink paint. There is a big, wide bed. There is a basket. There are dressing up clothes. There is a wardrobe.

We had to read our writing to a friend and see if they could get a picture of the room in their head. Doing this task helped us to think about describing settings and this is something we can transfer into our story writing.