Whiteness Primary 6/7

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VCOP activity

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Today we did an activity which included VCOP. 

We did this by using sticky notes and putting them on dice. We started witha boring sentence and using the die uplevelled it until the sentence got so good we could start again.

I used this as an example. 

1. I ate a sandwich.
2. I ate a BLT sandwich.
3. Suddenly I ate a BLT sandwich.
4. Suddenly I ate a salty BLT sandwich.
5. Suddenly I ate a salty BLT delicious sandwich.
6. Suddenly I ate a salty BLT delicious sandwich whilst making three scoops of ice cream.
7. Suddenly I ate a salty BLT delicious outstanding whilst making three scoops of ice cream.

I can see the benefit of using VCOP because the last sentence is much 
better than the first.

Author: Will Tait

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