{"id":5305,"date":"2013-02-20T11:12:33","date_gmt":"2013-02-20T11:12:33","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/sh\/BurravoePrimarySchool\/?p=5305"},"modified":"2013-02-20T11:13:53","modified_gmt":"2013-02-20T11:13:53","slug":"the-key","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/sh\/BurravoePrimarySchool\/2013\/02\/20\/the-key\/","title":{"rendered":"The Key"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"color: #20b2aa\"><span style=\"color: #20b2aa\">One day I was walking slowly in the woods when I saw something glistening in the sunlight so I stumbled up to it trembling with fear because it was going to bring me bad luck, but it didn\u2019t, instead a mysterious door appeared then I\u00a0released\u00a0where ever I went with key I just had to drop it on the grass and the magic door would appear and I could peer through. One night I decided to pack some things for my unbelievable journey then I tiptoed down the stairs being cautious not to wake my snoozing parents. When I got outside I dropped the key on the rocksoild ground\u00a0 the door appeared yet again so I stepped inside\u00a0 it was like a palace it had my name and pictures of me\u00a0 all over the isolated walls\u00a0 so I had a look around and then\u00a0 it hit me I remembered mum\u00a0 on the phone to someone talking about selling the house\u00a0 this is\u00a0 my home\u00a0 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh oh I\u2019m\u00a0 sorry\u00a0 I\u2019m just really excited sorry got to go.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #20b2aa\">By Kerry<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #328550\">I saw you had a mixture of past tense and present tense. I didn\u2019t get the bad luck part so maybe you need to look that through again!<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #328550\">Apart from that your work is good and I can see you have been using the thesaurus and I like the word glistening. Try using more grammar. Fae Mia<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #20b2aa\">Thanks Mia I fixed what you told me to fix, next time I will use more grammar in my work Thanks for commenting<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #20b2aa\">Fae Kerry<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>One day I was walking slowly in the woods when I saw something glistening in the sunlight so I stumbled up to it trembling with fear because it was going to bring me bad luck, but it didn\u2019t, instead a &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/sh\/BurravoePrimarySchool\/2013\/02\/20\/the-key\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":21,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[168],"tags":[2545,2559,57800],"class_list":["post-5305","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-story","tag-adjectives","tag-adverbs","tag-story"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/sh\/BurravoePrimarySchool\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5305","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/sh\/BurravoePrimarySchool\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/sh\/BurravoePrimarySchool\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/sh\/BurravoePrimarySchool\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/21"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/sh\/BurravoePrimarySchool\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=5305"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/sh\/BurravoePrimarySchool\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5305\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":5327,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/sh\/BurravoePrimarySchool\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5305\/revisions\/5327"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/sh\/BurravoePrimarySchool\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=5305"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/sh\/BurravoePrimarySchool\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=5305"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.glowscotland.org.uk\/sh\/BurravoePrimarySchool\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=5305"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}