Burravoe Primary School

Dilivering Milk

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There is five ducks going to the river. The man is delivering milk to the cake shop. a lady is walking the dog and another lady is taking a little girl for a walk. the car is blue. the boy is feeding the ducks.


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  1. My class liked reading your sentences. They liked that you thought it was a cake shop.

  2. Hello Hannah!
    I really liked this story about delivering milk. You have helped your reader see all the colours and activities going on by the adjectives you have used. Well done!
    I do hope you will share more of your writing here on 5SC!

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