Omnomnom oh sorry I had just finished eating a flake but it’s so weird because I ate it all but they are some left the next day. Can you keep a secret I think it’s magic don’t tell anyone so I am going to set a camera to watch it they are a TV in my room so I can see what happens. Wait here comes my Dad he’s eating the flake and then opens another one but leaves some on the plate so they aren’t a flake eater is my dad so we don’t have to worry anymore phew.
Kerry’s 100 word challenge week 9
November 16, 2012 | 3 Comments
November 21, 2012 at 12:23 pm
Kerry,
I love that you start with the sound of eating. I also really like that this character thought it was magic. I would like you to think about where sentences come to a complete stop.
Keep writing. I hope to see you in the challenge again.
November 22, 2012 at 12:11 pm
Why thank you I was trying to make sure that it did sound like she was eating and also it tryed to make it sound she was wispering
thank you
Fae Kerry 😀
November 20, 2012 at 2:32 pm
Dear Kerry ,
Nice job typing your post . Keep up the good work ! :):D
Sincerely,
Janani