writing character descriptions

We have been writing character descriptions in class.

We had to good describing word such as strange, sticky and rough, we also had to use similies and metaphors. We listend to a film clip called the lost thing and had to use our imaginations to write it. Our target was describe what the character looks like, sounds like and wearing. Here is a piece of writing.

“A few years back I was sitting on the sand minding my own and thats when I saw it. A poor little blue scaly object, I walked over and thought it must have been washed up by the rolling frothy waves that were crashing into shore. I slowly bent down and picked it up, it had a small gash at the side of its head, its bright green eyes were locked on to mine. I picked it up it felt stone cold, it was a strange sticky feeling, rough but not slimey. I looked closer, it seemed to have gils but also tiny little legs, I felt sorry for the poor little thing. So i took it over to my little perch and pored water along its slimey body, it purred but not like any cat”.

By Rory

ENG 2-31a

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