When I was a child, I was worried about cutting my hair,
But when I got my chance to escape,
I finally got to feel the long-wet grass touching my bare feet,
The water cold but wet,
The danger I got in,
Now I see why the outside isn’t what it seems,
I wish my long hair did more than cure people,
By Emeri
3 replies on “Rapunzel’s Long Hair”
Your poem is really good and I agree with Grace that the line ‘ I finally got to feel the long wet grass touch my bare feet.’ leaves a great image in your head. Well Done.
I liked how you described Rapunzel’s story and how you described the feel of the water and grass. Well done Emeri
I love the line ‘ I finally got to feel the long wet grass touch my bare feet.’ It gives a great image.