Who made the sea?
Who made the sun?
Who made the world?
Who made dogs this dog I mean.
My dog’s name is Monty
and he is a fur ball.
A domesticated bear.
His eyes are like crystallised amber
so luminous at night.
All his fur could fill a paddling pool.
Tell me do humans pick the dog
or do they pick you?
By Callum (11)
6 replies on “My Bear Monty”
I loved the last line
The last line got me thinking.
I loved the last line it makes you think
soo goood 🙂
I like the line saying he’s a domestic bear! 😎
love the line ” tell me, do humans pick the dog or do they pick you?”
well done!
❀its a saying my mum uses❀
and so I used it in the poem since i think its a lovely saying❀