Bitter Sea, Sweet Sugar

What I love about kayaking is the capsizing  

What I hate about slugs is the slime 

What I love about sweets is the sugar  

What I hate about the sea is the bitter cold  

What I love about dogs is the is the cute 

What I hate about cats is the claws 

What I love about graffiti is the colours 

What I hate about devices is the charging  

What I love about maths is the challenge 

What I hate about drawing is the mistakes 

What I love about animals is their love for you 

What I hate about swimming is the water up your nose 

What I love about chickens is their curious noses 

What I hate about love is the roller coasters

Chloe Sansom 

6 replies on “Bitter Sea, Sweet Sugar”

Chloe I absolutely loved reading your poem – so many fantastic lines with so much meaning behind each. The title is so fitting and it all flows so nicely. You cover so many topics. Very well done. I can’t wait to read your next one…

This poem flows quickly and reminds me of the waves in your featured image. Lots of power, lots of salt. I love the last line.

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