A group of dedicated students who attend St Aidan’s High took on the challenge of overcoming Tinto hill in order to raise money for APD charity, even though most of the climbers peers were participating in the St Andrews Hospice Fun Run, Sunday was the only day suitable for the dedicated students. One of the teachers who took part in the challenge Miss Kelly, “The trip was a fantastic experience, as we got to look at glacial features while also getting some exercise” She also commented that “ I loved that the trip also peoples first time climbing a hill” The weather on the day improved the situation as one of the students that day said “ It was dry and sunny until we reached the top where it was very windy” The group also enjoyed the event with the company of their family and friends, as commented on by Miss Kelly “We met quite a lot of participants due to pupils bringing their families along who worked a side to raise money for the supported charity
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