Amazing Adjectives

For ‘Writer’s Craft’ today we were looking at how adjectives can improve our writing.
We studied a piece of writing by JK Rowling and extracted all her fabulous adjectives to see how dull and boring the passage was without them.
For homework tonight we want you to improve or ‘up-level’ the following sentence:
The lady travelled into town to buy clothes.

Try to make this sentence as ‘juicy’ as you can!!!

17 thoughts on “Amazing Adjectives”

  1. The beautiful lady travelled quickly, in her sports car, into town to buy some awesome clothes for the ball.

  2. the young and beautiful lady travelled into town to buy some glamorous and pretty clothes.

  3. The elegant lady casualy casually into the crowded dirty town to buy some glamorous clothes!

  4. The elegant lady casualy casually into the crowded dirty town to buy some glamorous clothes.

  5. The exhausted lady, who was a bit grumpy, went into the town to buy lots of expensive and fashionable clothes.

  6. The lovely lady with long grey hair travelled along the long uneven road into town to buy grey and horrible looking clothes to wear to go and visit the queen.

  7. The wrinkly, old lady travelled slowly into heaving town to buy extremely extortionate clothes.

  8. the hairy lady travelled into a small town to buy some pretty clothes. see you all tomorrow 😀

  9. The horrible,spiteful,old lady travelled slowly into the beautiful town to buy some pretty
    clothes!

  10. The beautiful small lady drove her car to town to look for some stylish new clothes. 🙂

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